Forty Finches in the Leaves
By lupus tenebrae
To see beneath the sea of leaves
you
must look through the veins of green,
they’re telescoping to
the shore.
The loons will call, if you’ll believe
in sirens of the loch, serene
in voicing murmurs, nothing more.
Finches fly as forty thieves,
beneath the sand, they flee
the scene,
but lately, there were forty-four.
Cologne
besets these fading sleeves
and shapes the wind in serpentine
touching the sun, just like before.
This overpass, just
by the bay,
is full of life, with much to say.
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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Sunday, June 24, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I decided to combine my observations with a curious structure called trilonet. I'm kinda happy with the results.Awards
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On Monday, May 18, 2020, Hands_Around_My_Throat
(67) wrote:
I loved this. Thank you.
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Finches have personal meaning to me.I had them in my old profile.I find it very disturbing...the finch to me is a cute bird, but it is also a very serious omen.I must respect this.Thank you.
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On Sunday, June 24, 2012, ColorMeToxic
(238) wrote:
You certainly have broken your block! Excellent piece!
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A former member wrote:
Quickly this has become one of my very favorites of yours. Love the observations in this, as well as how smoothly it's delivered. Terrific piece, sir. One of the best I've read in a while. Kudos!