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improvising on a theme
By BetaWolfinVA
A work inspired by I'm Falling Apart
skirting the edge of disaster
dancing on the razors edge
i ride the chaos while i want to
and longer still besides
we all have drama waiting
and perhapse love finds us
on the other side ..
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Copyright 2014 HHMCameron
Published on Wednesday, January 8, 2014.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, January 9, 2014, Intoxicating Delirium
(275)
wrote:
This poem feels... young.. It has a youthful hopefulness to it.. I loved it and enjoyed the read very much. Great write :)
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On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, DarkDruidess
(326) wrote:
I love the third line...because riding the chaos is better than drowning in it...awesome little piece here.
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On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Nice inspirational piece. It's a twisting, winding road in which we travel. Losing and gaining knowledge and love along the way. And sometimes we lose a piece of ourselves along the way.
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