Traffic

By BetaWolfinVA

wrything along on
black and grey roads
gleefully grabbing hold
stealing our souls more each day
.
the state lies to us  
and tells us it cares
with each new thing it tries
to make the beast larger
.
weekends and holidays
are the only days that you can get to work
in a reasonable time breaking free
from its soul crushing grip

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Copyright Friday, 25 January 2013 HHMCameron
Published on Friday, November 28, 2014.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

i wonder if this works right... i havnt slept yet...
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  • A former member wrote: Used to work with a truck, some days I would drive 15-20 hours, sleep 4-5, go back for 10, sleep 5-6, go 15-20 for 3 years... I'll never go back. Hate traffic!

  • PoetessDarkly On Monday, February 4, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    I hate traffic, drivers are stupid where I live. lol great pen!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Wednesday, February 6, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    only time that you drive with sanity (presupposing you yourself are sane) is when its a single person driving on a lonely road Scholar

  • dwells On Thursday, January 31, 2013, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    That's why I worked nightshift for the last 15 years, cheers!

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, February 2, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    Traffic, I hates it Scholar

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