Glass Dolls

By Six-Out

as you place your hand
in mine
that shy smile
[you know I love it]
nothing can be the same
after tonight

-

your lips- (that chestnut red)
as your tongue glides across them
and your hand grazes my cheek
slowly guiding me
to this mental heaven

your eyes- (that penetrating hue of lust)
send me into a euphoric state
as I inch closer
into the wonderland
that is you

your breath- (hot upon my face)
as your voice quivers
while my hands explore
the divinity that now stands
right before me


-


the satin sheets murmer that distinctive lullaby
as your body cascades into
our private odeum, center stage
as the spectacle unfolds in it's full grandeur

the ripples of the sheets, canyoning around you
framing the portrait of your magnificant vanilla sky
tracing the intricate layers, the mesas and valleys
as the embodiment of your landscape
slowly takes shape

luminous pools shimmering with anticipation
behind the shadows of sable tresses
the flaxen canvas radiating with carnal desire
and a devious smile masked
by a pensive bite of the lip

the supple curve of your neck
accenting the soft angles of persperated perfection
your eminence trapped within their
gossamer bondage, suppressed
craving uninhibited liberation

flowing into the pearly plateau of your abdomen
as your hands caress the unabashed tranquility
glassading along your thighs
your fingers ballet to the beat of your heart
as you abide, and call me with your eyes

your porcelain legs, extend endlessly
interlacing as two finely woven strands of silk
submerging into the depths of the glassy fabric
as it flows flawlessly, encircling you
shrouding what's left of the portrayal




the night's young
and so are we

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Copyright 2004 Six-Out
Published on Tuesday, June 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Adult" and "Poetry"
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  • Dei On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    this is a much more innocent and loving version of yourself. Interesting to read. So different from the way you wright now

  • A former member wrote: wow so much imagery, i love it, this is sexxi&sweet:)

  • alaskanamber On Wednesday, December 6, 2006, alaskanamber (64)By person wrote:

    never have i seen more beautiful erotica. The feelings you evoke go beyond pure horniness.

  • beautifulfallenangel On Monday, October 30, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (63)By person wrote:

    utterly astonishing.....amazingly beautiful

  • blue On Sunday, October 29, 2006, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    oh baby, what have we been waiting for?

  • A former member wrote: when we were talking the other night about favorite pieces, i forgot to mention this one. i will always adore this poem.

  • A former member wrote: this must be faved. beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

  • Mahakala On Monday, July 18, 2005, Mahakala (209)By person wrote:

    Woo Hoo...Damn...is it hot in here or is it just me :P absolutely love it...very vivid...brings my imagination to life (again).

  • Kinkypoptart On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    very good write ~*~Tart~*~

  • A former member wrote: a very sensual, stirring write....wonderful

  • elisa On Saturday, February 26, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ooh damn..........here....here.........it.......comes.............*s w o o n s* ;)elisa

  • Carmina Gitana On Saturday, February 19, 2005, Carmina Gitana (152)By person wrote:

    This is so beautiful :) So detailed, so tender, like fingertips memorizing every inch of a lover's flesh.

  • A former member wrote: i love it

  • BeautifulCalamity On Saturday, November 27, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    beautiful six. absolutely perfect.

  • Atalanta On Friday, November 19, 2004, Atalanta (37)By person wrote:

    Oh my, you really do know how to write a good sex poem. Again you put Dirk and Steve to shame!*favs*

  • sIo On Sunday, November 7, 2004, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    j'adore....

  • Lotophagi On Monday, November 1, 2004, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    talk about RAHness...... RAH! nice write *currently drooling*.....

  • Northstar On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    this makes my heart race--exquisite to read

  • hate_doll On Sunday, July 25, 2004, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    ::heart attack::

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    chills running up my spine...so intense and vivid. Beautiful write, this.

  • illspokenwords On Monday, June 21, 2004, illspokenwords (8)By person wrote:

    amazing. i suppose you really are wowable. heh. i like the way this is written. it's extremely descriptive. i love when i can close my eyes and i can see it. very nice.

  • flying_fox On Friday, June 18, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    Wow... I got totally lost in this one. Magnificent imagery, an extremely sexy and romantic piece just filled with delicious anticipation...

  • Mistress Morbid On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Sinister

  • Lost_Soul On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Lost_Soul (34)By person wrote:

    This has to be the most romantic poem that I have ever read.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    what a romantic and passionate write...its almost sickening...-l-

  • nell On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, nell (271)By person wrote:

    hmm what can i say thta other's haven't? u created magnificent images here, just fucking wonderfull sixie *hugs*

  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    wow,this is amazing as always it was beautiful so sexy and yet so romantic i love this peice~ss

  • Crystal Passion On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    Who says Jon is just a hardass with a vindictive nature? Such a sweet piece Jon.

  • A former member wrote: It's so romantical. *dreamy sigh* The whole piece flows with such grace and perfection...and wow. I would never anything short of brilliant from you, but this is a masterpiece.

  • glasshouse On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    *deep sigh* I can't even speak. You're too magnificant for words. Its more than I even expected. You're perfect. Period. -Glass

  • glasshouse On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    I just read it again... I'm sure I'll read it again in a minute... but I just had to say.... Wow. -Glass

  • glasshouse On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    And then I read it again... cuz I can't seem to stop... and it's seriously... the most beautiful thing I've ever read and it just makes my heart jump. *kiss* -Glass

  • worm On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    you've got it! I really like it when you strive for poetic perfection... it just shows the rest of us what were up against... beautiful, Six, just beautiful!

  • A former member wrote: the images this gave me were just amazing. this is just awesome six, no words can describe the beauty of this, wonderful write ~serpentine~

  • A former member wrote: this is so perfect in its splendidness. i loved it. its so....bleh..its like silk. its so soft and delicate. wonderful work, darling

  • Seraphic On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    "the mesas and valleys as the embodiment of your landscape" I think I know why you thought I'd like this. I love it. :) This is beyond sensual, it's perfect. *~seraph~*

  • A former member wrote: 'your landscape slowly takes shape uminous pools shimmering with anticipation' exotic/erotic& enchantingly beautiful these passions drenched in pure poetry splendidly written...

  • Drea On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    wow. I'm awed and turned on. lol I love when you write like this. You put so much (or seems) emotion and passion into it. Maybe one day I will be 1/3 as good as you.lol :P


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