Glass Dolls
By Six-Out
as you place your hand
in mine
that shy smile
[you know I love it]
nothing can be the same
after tonight
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your lips- (that chestnut red)
as your tongue glides across them
and your hand grazes my cheek
slowly guiding me
to this mental heaven
your eyes- (that penetrating hue of lust)
send me into a euphoric state
as I inch closer
into the wonderland
that is you
your breath- (hot upon my face)
as your voice quivers
while my hands explore
the divinity that now stands
right before me
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the satin sheets murmer that distinctive lullaby
as your body cascades into
our private odeum, center stage
as the spectacle unfolds in it's full grandeur
the ripples of the sheets, canyoning around you
framing the portrait of your magnificant vanilla sky
tracing the intricate layers, the mesas and valleys
as the embodiment of your landscape
slowly takes shape
luminous pools shimmering with anticipation
behind the shadows of sable tresses
the flaxen canvas radiating with carnal desire
and a devious smile masked
by a pensive bite of the lip
the supple curve of your neck
accenting the soft angles of persperated perfection
your eminence trapped within their
gossamer bondage, suppressed
craving uninhibited liberation
flowing into the pearly plateau of your abdomen
as your hands caress the unabashed tranquility
glassading along your thighs
your fingers ballet to the beat of your heart
as you abide, and call me with your eyes
your porcelain legs, extend endlessly
interlacing as two finely woven strands of silk
submerging into the depths of the glassy fabric
as it flows flawlessly, encircling you
shrouding what's left of the portrayal
the night's young
and so are we
Comments on "Glass Dolls"
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dei
(663) wrote:
this is a much more innocent and loving version of yourself. Interesting to read. So different from the way you wright now
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A former member wrote:
wow so much imagery, i love it, this is sexxi&sweet:)
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On Wednesday, December 6, 2006, alaskanamber
(64) wrote:
never have i seen more beautiful erotica. The feelings you evoke go beyond pure horniness.
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On Monday, October 30, 2006, beautifulfallenangel
(62) wrote:
utterly astonishing.....amazingly beautiful
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On Sunday, October 29, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
oh baby, what have we been waiting for?
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A former member wrote:
when we were talking the other night about favorite pieces, i forgot to mention this one. i will always adore this poem.
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A former member wrote:
this must be faved. beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
Woo Hoo...Damn...is it hot in here or is it just me :P absolutely love it...very vivid...brings my imagination to life (again).
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On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
very good write ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
a very sensual, stirring write....wonderful
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On Saturday, February 26, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
ooh damn..........here....here.........it.......comes.............*s w o o n s* ;)elisa
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On Saturday, February 19, 2005, Carmina Gitana
(149) wrote:
This is so beautiful :) So detailed, so tender, like fingertips memorizing every inch of a lover's flesh.
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A former member wrote:
i love it
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
beautiful six. absolutely perfect.
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, Atalanta
(37) wrote:
Oh my, you really do know how to write a good sex poem. Again you put Dirk and Steve to shame!*favs*
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, sIo
(898) wrote:
j'adore....
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
talk about RAHness...... RAH! nice write *currently drooling*.....
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
this makes my heart race--exquisite to read
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On Sunday, July 25, 2004, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
::heart attack::
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
chills running up my spine...so intense and vivid. Beautiful write, this.
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On Monday, June 21, 2004, illspokenwords
(8) wrote:
amazing. i suppose you really are wowable. heh. i like the way this is written. it's extremely descriptive. i love when i can close my eyes and i can see it. very nice.
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
Wow... I got totally lost in this one. Magnificent imagery, an extremely sexy and romantic piece just filled with delicious anticipation...
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Sinister
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
This has to be the most romantic poem that I have ever read.
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
what a romantic and passionate write...its almost sickening...-l-
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, nell
(270) wrote:
hmm what can i say thta other's haven't? u created magnificent images here, just fucking wonderfull sixie *hugs*
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
wow,this is amazing as always it was beautiful so sexy and yet so romantic i love this peice~ss
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
Who says Jon is just a hardass with a vindictive nature? Such a sweet piece Jon.
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A former member wrote:
It's so romantical. *dreamy sigh* The whole piece flows with such grace and perfection...and wow. I would never anything short of brilliant from you, but this is a masterpiece.
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
*deep sigh* I can't even speak. You're too magnificant for words. Its more than I even expected. You're perfect. Period. -Glass
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
I just read it again... I'm sure I'll read it again in a minute... but I just had to say.... Wow. -Glass
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On Wednesday, June 16, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
And then I read it again... cuz I can't seem to stop... and it's seriously... the most beautiful thing I've ever read and it just makes my heart jump. *kiss* -Glass
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, worm
(1149) wrote:
you've got it! I really like it when you strive for poetic perfection... it just shows the rest of us what were up against... beautiful, Six, just beautiful!
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A former member wrote:
the images this gave me were just amazing. this is just awesome six, no words can describe the beauty of this, wonderful write ~serpentine~
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A former member wrote:
this is so perfect in its splendidness. i loved it. its so....bleh..its like silk. its so soft and delicate. wonderful work, darling
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
"the mesas and valleys as the embodiment of your landscape" I think I know why you thought I'd like this. I love it. :) This is beyond sensual, it's perfect. *~seraph~*
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A former member wrote:
'your landscape
slowly takes shape
uminous pools shimmering with anticipation' exotic/erotic& enchantingly beautiful these passions drenched in pure poetry splendidly written...
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On Tuesday, June 15, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
wow. I'm awed and turned on. lol I love when you write like this. You put so much (or seems) emotion and passion into it. Maybe one day I will be 1/3 as good as you.lol :P