Devil's Call
By SilentStalker
And my flames shall consume thee;
Pledge your life now unto me.
Place you in my gentle care;
Trust in me; I'll take you there.
Lie yourself down on my throne;
See me in your eyes.
Separating flesh from bone,
Kill all you despise.
Send my knife now through your chest,
With a single thrust.
Seal our bond with bleeding trust;
I will do the rest.
As darkness takes shape of your sins;
Creates from it a vicious
beast.
It senses your fear from within,
And on your soul begins
to feast.
Your silent cries of pain;
Such a delightful
thing to see.
Your life begins to drain,
Slowly becoming part
of me.
You've never felt like this before;
Your soul,
dissolved into my core.
We've now become one and the same;
You now need not call out my name.
But I shall watch in glee,
And give you to those you have slain.
You cannot stop the pain;
You're there now for eternity.
It's such a price for you
to pay
To suffer for my greed.
But there are more to lead
astray,
And this is time to feed.
And my flames shall
consume him,
That lives his life on every whim;
As I shall
lay his soul to waste,
And send him to his darkest place.
Awards
Comments on "Devil's Call"
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On Saturday, November 18, 2017, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
Great poem. Something that's looming large and to judge us. Love it. JD
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On Thursday, November 8, 2007, Distorted_Reality
(100) wrote:
*gazes at screen amazed* this is purely amazing, just like every poem I've read of yours so far, you are very good ;)
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A former member wrote:
mmmm mmmmm this is truly beastly and wicked ass sickly. it beckons to me and I desire the taste of blood... I long for damnation itself, sexy death hateful write... hey, thanks!
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On Thursday, May 11, 2006, HalfDarkAngel
(59) wrote:
wow. thats all i can say. the imagery was amazing. this is definitly a piece of art that will stay with me.
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A former member wrote:
wow,this is...amazing. twisted in such a beautiful way.. tis art!
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On Tuesday, February 1, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
shit darun, this is awesome. It would be fucking sweet if you could actually sing this with slipknot playing their instruments and the singer doing back up vocals for you, i really liked this, i wish slipknot would make a song out of it with ya, ~Josh~
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A former member wrote:
this personally i think is a work of art!! put some audio to this beast of a song and it would kick ass so much!!
keep it up!
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A former member wrote:
a fair song indeed SS, farkn rocked.
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On Friday, May 21, 2004, nell
(270) wrote:
hmmm how doyou find plagarisers is my question..and btw this kicks arse
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...simply copy a line of your write that makes it stand out from any other basic conversation, and paste it onto the Google Search (or any search) to find out if it was posted somewhere else...and then attack, and attack...
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A former member wrote:
You know...if you were the one writing for Metallica, they're new album wouldn't suck so bad.
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, MGood
(60) wrote:
isnt that the truth
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On Monday, October 6, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
That's gotta be the most thoughtful thing someone's said to me...thank you...
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On Sunday, September 21, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Yea I would like to hear this in a shower of metal sounds... other then that it is a good write also.. Monkey
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On Sunday, September 21, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
Thanx. I have to find a musician for this one, I guess...