What Heralds the Imminent Spring?

By lupus tenebrae

I.

Sparrows, startled from their perch,
twittering song piercing the muffled winter air.

II.

Wegee Creek, rage loosed from its icy bonds;
restless, murky, dining on snowmelt
'til it bursts at the seams.

III.

Grass; emerald spires shone vibrant
against a dwindling sea of white.

IV.

Nature's lukewarm kiss; language
spoken in zephyrous tongue, breathing
life into a poet's once frostbitten hand.

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Copyright 2016 lupus tenebrae
Published on Monday, February 1, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A list poem comprised of all the little snippets of Spring that managed to peer through the cracks of Winter.
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, April 29, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    "Nature's lukewarm kiss; language spoken in zephyrous tongue" - great line! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • TheProphetUntold On Tuesday, February 2, 2016, TheProphetUntold (160)By person wrote:

    4 nice snippets. Have to say I really like 2, 1 and 3 close behind... good show. +tpu+

  • Drea On Monday, February 1, 2016, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    I have never been a fan of Spring. However, I must admit that reading this as the snow is silently falling outside made me long for it. This was quiet. I enjoyed it.

  • A former member wrote: A very interesting sequence work of the progression of spring and a fading winter. Excellent word selection and descriptive choices. Very well done.

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