Comments by TheProphetUntold
- "I can't not comment on anything related to the norse mythology. With Oden on our side is one of the best viking death metal albums, in my opinion. A worthy tribute... DIE FOR HONOR! GLORY! DEATH IN FIRE! +tpu+"
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "Valhalla Awaits Me" by Commander_Cadaver
- "The second and third stanza have really good lines, I wonder if maybe some parts of it could be omitted to deliver the same or more meaning. ex.. "I'm ok", I lie to myself....As I pick pocket happiness and irritate myself to sleep.... It's your work, I liked it. I tend to try and keep my ideas as short and clear as possible to make the meaning more emphasized. Does "pickpocketing happiness in tiny bursts" mean anything different/ more or less than "pickpocketing happiness"? Just an idea. I can relate to the topics of this poem all too well. Cheers. +tpu+"
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "Sad Soul" by Abberant
- "This is rich with allusion. The last two lines of the first stanza and the opening lines of the second stanza really pulled me in, they feel the most complete. +tpu+"
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "Blood Wolf Moon" by Damien
- "I don't lead people by the nose. To me poetry is saying more than is written, or deriving different images or meanings from what is actually written. I am more imagination than literal interpretation."
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "The Wolf Shepherd." by TheProphetUntold