_Beneath His Sheets _{Irresistible}

By soul_versing

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Like a fine merlot,
I'm drawn to his lips.

Silk impressions,
velvet touches,
sensational bursts... Devine.
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His body speaks the language of Gods
His tongue writes of a symphony
His touch a magnetic craving

I inhale his breath to savor the taste.




Eyes fixated upon his gaze
Body professing a heated yearning
Heart bleeding poetic pulse

Beneath his sheets, I forfeit myself.
Beneath his sheets...
.............................I'm his savior.





























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© 2017 J.L. Odom
Published on Friday, October 13, 2023.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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-Write on, poets, write on
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  • A former member wrote: Just pure and simple beauty, and so erotic. I can't help but be in awe of your talent, sweet princess. Rebs:).

  • A former member wrote: Ooh this poem was absolutely breathtaking. You sure know how to get a poets attention with this elegantly tasteful piece. 10x10

  • georgelstein On Wednesday, November 25, 2015, georgelstein (62)By person wrote:

    where eroticism and love meld, there is magic.

  • Lux On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Lux (299)By person wrote:

    I had one of these nights last night. Weird, how you've been with someone a year and a half almost and yet haven't made eye contact while making love. Last night that changed and this poem is a perfect representation of all I felt. I can't even imagine how wonderful it was from your perspective. Well wrought, Nettle.

  • Star On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Star (920)By person wrote:

    this by far one of the best erotic poems I've read on here. passionate, naughty, and yet still careful. gorgeous.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Wow, that was hot, romantic...and STEAMY. : ) Great piece! Love the passionate imagery. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • rwb35 On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, rwb35 (64)By person wrote:

    Nicely written, very (uh) stirring for lack of a better word. Keep writing

  • blue angel On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    "His tongue writes of a symphony His touch a magnetic craving" ... - Lusciously salacious lyrics of the carnal cravings. Feeling the warmth of this sexy ink early in the morning. Write on, indeed. :)~

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