_Beneath His Sheets _{Irresistible}
By soul_versing
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Like a fine merlot,
I'm drawn to his lips.
Silk impressions,
velvet touches,
sensational bursts... Devine.
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His body speaks the language of Gods
His tongue writes of a symphony
His touch a magnetic craving
I inhale his breath to savor the taste.
Eyes fixated upon his gaze
Body professing a heated yearning
Heart bleeding poetic pulse
Beneath his sheets, I forfeit myself.
Beneath his sheets...
.............................I'm his savior.
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© 2017 J.L. Odom
Published on Friday, October 13, 2023.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
-Write on, poets, write onComments on "_Beneath His Sheets _{Irresistible}"
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A former member wrote:
Just pure and simple beauty, and so erotic. I can't help but be in awe of your talent, sweet princess. Rebs:).
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A former member wrote:
Ooh this poem was absolutely breathtaking. You sure know how to get a poets attention with this elegantly tasteful piece. 10x10
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On Wednesday, November 25, 2015, georgelstein
(62) wrote:
where eroticism and love meld, there is magic.
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Lux
(280) wrote:
I had one of these nights last night. Weird, how you've been with someone a year and a half almost and yet haven't made eye contact while making love. Last night that changed and this poem is a perfect representation of all I felt. I can't even imagine how wonderful it was from your perspective. Well wrought, Nettle.
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Star
(879) wrote:
this by far one of the best erotic poems I've read on here. passionate, naughty, and yet still careful. gorgeous.
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Wow, that was hot, romantic...and STEAMY. : ) Great piece! Love the passionate imagery. Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, rwb35
(64) wrote:
Nicely written, very (uh) stirring for lack of a better word. Keep writing
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, blue angel
(866) wrote:
"His tongue writes of a symphony His touch a magnetic craving" ... - Lusciously salacious lyrics of the carnal cravings. Feeling the warmth of this sexy ink early in the morning. Write on, indeed. :)~