I Wonder.....
By Peyton1
In the structured form of Anaphora, 1st attempt........
I wonder..... what it would be like, to walk upon the red planet we call
Mars, while the surface is being bombarded by asteroids?
I wonder..... since we live on a planet made up of 70 percent water, why
a mere 20 ounces of it at any convenience store costs $1.79?
I wonder..... if we each were allowed a single trip back in time, how many
of us would attempt a quick financial fix, and how many would simply visit
a lost loved one who was dearly missed?
I wonder..... why a spider has to have so damn many legs? I mean seriously,
wouldn't four be enough? Who was it that decided it had to have eight?
(creepy little bastards!)
I wonder..... how it has come to be that nearly everything in our known
world revolves around poetry (it's everywhere). Yet, when I ask someone
if they like poetry, they act as if I'm talking about nursery rhymes?
I wonder..... why I would give up the answers to all of these questions,
just to know what her hair smells like, right after she steps from the
shower?
Author's Note:
I wonder.......indeedComments on "I Wonder....."
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On Thursday, March 6, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
It looks sexy in black... :) That last line pops the cork.. Glad you posted it here! Nice ink, hotrod*
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On Thursday, March 6, 2014, Peyton1
(202) wrote:
Thank you much miss Kendra! As I read your comment, I litterally envisioned a cork popping from a champagne bottle..... and we all know what champagne usually causes........ Thanks a bunch always for your kind comments................ ~hotrod~
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On Thursday, March 6, 2014, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Quandaries that I ponder on most days myself although the answer to the water thing is most of that water is very salty. Freshly washed and wet hair is a wonderful smell on your lover but of the things I wonder about when it comes to a woman in the shower it isn't hair, lol.
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On Thursday, March 6, 2014, Peyton1
(202) wrote:
Thanks for the read and comment, I agree with you on most of it. Ahh but, when it comes to the shower scene you have much to learn, grasshopper! For you see, if I were allowed to be there to smell her hair as she steps from the shower, I would already know all the other secrets that my heart desired.... yes? Yes....indeed!
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On Thursday, March 6, 2014, soul_versing
(772) wrote:
Omg, Mike... My words escape me, especially the ending and ending note. I loVe.
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On Thursday, March 6, 2014, Peyton1
(202) wrote:
Thank you Nett, I'm glad you like. I have this one posted on another site as well. The ending was inspired by...well...let's just say it was inspired... :) Color of the day, Navy blue.............. ~Mike~
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On Thursday, March 6, 2014, Peyton1
(202) wrote:
OMG, I just noticed as I was about to go away from the page, thank you so much for the bookmark!! Words just can't say it, so I won't make them do an epic fail by trying..........................