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The Untainted Snow
By lupus tenebrae
Smoke
follows
beauty, much
like how a stray
shi-
ver
follows
the blanched and
delicate lace
of
the
first un-
tainted snow:
as a sober-
ing
thought;
jealous,
of magic,
attached at the
hip.
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Copyright 2014 lupus tenebrae
Published on Saturday, November 22, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Inspired by the recent cold snap, here.Comments on "The Untainted Snow"
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On Monday, November 24, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
As always, your imagery is like a cascade of visuals. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
It is a daunting poem – but we can take consolation from the fact that, by the time we reach the end of this remarkable, powerful poem, lupus has answered it convincingly, for themself at least. This is an acute and insightful poem that lodges in the ear and sear themselves on the vision.
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On Sunday, November 23, 2014, dwells
(4284) wrote:
A veritable cascade of bells Wolfie, well done and so good to see you again sir - Dan
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