Coming Down off a Sugar High (and Wishing for you)

By BetaWolfinVA

Wishing for you
Coming Down off a Sugar High (and Wishing for you)
====================
fully baked on both
sugars, fermented and not
it was wonderful
.
vanilla ice cream
quite dashed with some quik powder
perfection, heaven
.
frozen mud slide is
served in a little juice glass
now feeling the burn
.
long island iced tea
served up in candle holder
that i fill two ounce
.
my only regret
about last night is that you
weren't really here
.
slowly snuggled to
finally asking if wanted
cherished in my arms
.
cuddled in my arms
and cupped, as i drifted off
to sweet dreamless? sleep
.
a long time coming
since i first noticed you, such
a beautiful mind

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Copyright Wednesday, 27 February 2013 HHMCameron
Published on Wednesday, August 6, 2014.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

think that stanzas 5 and 7 are much better apart on their own, thats how it started really (but i started intending to write about the sugar high).... heck with it, doing both versions, tell me if either or both versions are worth saving
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