Chasing a Goddess Through the Sky
By lupus tenebrae
Your intangible way
of
flirting with danger
had captured my trembling heart as
a curious butterfly; the
sweet
ever
afterimage of
a still corpulent
man chasing the sable-tinged illusion
of eternity
with a young goddess, tracing
pirouettes through my vacant thoughts.
I stir, and watch as she steals
a blade of grass from my hand;
lingering for a moment,
dancing to and fro,
then dispersing in the summer air
while carrying the vestiges
of one more breathy and lachrymose hymn.
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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Author's Note:
Not bad, considering the writer's block I've had lately. Using my invented form of televerse.Comments on "Chasing a Goddess Through the Sky"
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On Monday, January 4, 2016, Lab Rat
(124) wrote:
I love the lightness of this, the airy free spirit touch it draws out. Thank you, this was enjoyable.
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Congratulations! A most compelling read. :)
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On Wednesday, November 5, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Beautifully descriptive. You've left a lasting impression within my mind. -Bows
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A former member wrote:
Absolutely breathtaking for something you wrote in a block, it seemed so effortless. There's a calamity to it leaving a honey suckle after taste under the tounge. Those last two lines were a great finish. Very impressive.
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A former member wrote:
articulation your paint brush, and love your canvas. Beautiful is the image you trapped upon the canvas in which you began with. well writen (=
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On Monday, July 29, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
This is lovely, it paints such a beautiful picture.
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A former member wrote:
I love your articulation in here, im adding it to my favorites