Poetry upon Request (6 stanza renku)

By BetaWolfinVA

shining through the screen
the grace you carry your self
with does captivate
all men in that busy room
and make all men dream of you
-
eyes that sparkle blue
and Beautiful Auburn Hair
despite over flash
my attention was first drawn by
the picture i first did see
-
you are the right size
if that fence picture is you
allways fishing for
well deserved compliments that
seldom able to give voice
-
where is this going,
where do you want this to go
but wait, think maybe
maybe i should fix my self
first before i ask your plan
-
or dream of looking
into eyes that sparkle blue
and running fingers
through beautiful auburn hair
or even holding you tight
-
cannot help thinking
you would fit right in my arms
if you wanted to
after i got free of her
got my self sane and alive

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Copyright 27 Nov 2012 HHMCameron
Published on Friday, November 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

interesting that the Live version of Garth Brooks - And the Thunder Rolls started playing on my pandora shortly after i wrote this... humm, God is an Iron?
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  • BetaWolfinVA On Thursday, December 27, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    at least this gained me a friend... i can count those on one hand. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: "... cannot help thinking you would fit right in my arms if you wanted to..." Very beautiful! Ten!!! lol Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Sunday, December 2, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (795)By person wrote:

    glad that you liked it... one of the last things she did before leaving where we met was thanking me for the poem and asking me if i used yahoo...without telling me her yahoo tag Scholar

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