Our Maritime Moment

By lupus tenebrae

 



Dear romantic etchings,



You taunt me in surnames,
karats attached with twine,
and flights of lust and fantasy.

I’d ask you to stop,
but love is a cloudy sea foam,
where the froth tickles my soles
into blind, devoted submission

and all I can think of, then,
is slow dancing across it,
as if it were tangible, real,
like the feelings I can’t diminish.

It must sound silly, or cliché
like one hit wonders
turned professors on puppy love,
but it’s so true, brutally so.

I pressed rewind every day,
the metaphorical mixtape
you handed me was lossless and eternal ,
some semblance of our maritime moment.

There’s no dream language this time, however,
no muffled confessions into my palms,
or silent wishes gone unanswered,
for an unrequited ever after,

just a loser, in writing
his deepest, dirtiest laundry
into blanched, white splinters



Your friend in waiting. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Thursday, November 1, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Basically, the same premise as writing letters and never sending them, although...
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  • Nehema On Wednesday, July 17, 2013, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    The fourth stanza hit home for me, maybe because I'm an eighties kid. This is a beautiful expression of truth, you're lucky to be so talented, able to express your love so eloquently. Lucky girl - XXOO Scholar

  • A former member wrote: these words are full of flight and love but never whimsy.. their soul weight is dynamic and ever pressing. i'm impressed, bewitched, envious of the utter poeticism of this. true art. Sterling write. Thank you. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: what a really cool concept and the way it just trickled over my mind was so soothing and dreamy. beautiful write. really like your work. thanks. Scholar

  • dwells On Thursday, November 1, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Walking in the surf, very romantic any time of day, to feel the gentle power of the mighty ocean with our footfalls, cheers!

  • Maladroit On Thursday, November 1, 2012, Maladroit (198)By person wrote:

    I desperately wish I could hold on to these sorts of emotions and box them into something more permanent. So, I will bookmark, as I fear it is as close as I can personally get. Ironically, before reading, I posted a "letter" too. Zero similarities, but I wish it were....

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