Our Maritime Moment
By lupus tenebrae
Dear romantic etchings,
You taunt me in surnames,
karats attached with twine,
and flights
of lust and fantasy.
I’d ask you to stop,
but love
is a cloudy sea foam,
where the froth tickles my soles
into
blind, devoted submission
and all I can think of, then,
is slow dancing across it,
as if it were tangible, real,
like
the feelings I can’t diminish.
It must sound silly, or
cliché
like one hit wonders
turned professors on puppy love,
but it’s so true, brutally so.
I pressed rewind every
day,
the metaphorical mixtape
you handed me was lossless and
eternal ,
some semblance of our maritime moment.
There’s
no dream language this time, however,
no muffled confessions into
my palms,
or silent wishes gone unanswered,
for an unrequited
ever after,
just a loser, in writing
his deepest, dirtiest
laundry
into blanched, white splinters
Your
friend in waiting.
Author's Note:
Basically, the same premise as writing letters and never sending them, although...Comments on "Our Maritime Moment"
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On Wednesday, July 17, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
The fourth stanza hit home for me, maybe because I'm an eighties kid. This is a beautiful expression of truth, you're lucky to be so talented, able to express your love so eloquently. Lucky girl - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
these words are full of flight and love but never whimsy.. their soul weight is dynamic and ever pressing. i'm impressed, bewitched, envious of the utter poeticism of this. true art. Sterling write. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
what a really cool concept and the way it just trickled over my mind was so soothing and dreamy. beautiful write. really like your work. thanks.
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On Thursday, November 1, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Walking in the surf, very romantic any time of day, to feel the gentle power of the mighty ocean with our footfalls, cheers!
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On Thursday, November 1, 2012, Maladroit
(198) wrote:
I desperately wish I could hold on to these sorts of emotions and box them into something more permanent. So, I will bookmark, as I fear it is as close as I can personally get. Ironically, before reading, I posted a "letter" too. Zero similarities, but I wish it were....