Comatose on Cloud Nine (feat. Spikey)
By lupus tenebrae
this night blooms
in the sheath of youth,
a colored whimpering
shuddering like branches.
opening bare, barely,
beneath
heavenly canvas,
autumnal touches abound,
leaving a lingering
absence.
absence of warmth
and shivering foliage,
that
masquerades as a
tinder basket lullaby.
raspy whispers
mention
sonatas and saxophones
that swoon a gentle heart,
rendered servile, comatose.
comatose on cloud nine
at
the verge of limbo,
ignorance is blissful
and defiant of the
reaper.
and happiness mirrors the moon,
becomes beams
uncatchable,
becomes a faint question,
it begs after what is
left.
what is left of water cycles
from the trickles in
eyes?
a once evaporated
molecule of former self.
what
is left of a body
drenched in dewy doubt
and softs shades of
dusk,
locks star combed, grief parted?
parted diamonds
from silt,
a certain saline erosion
of ever shifting dunes.
cavernous depths are revealed
to be fiberglass,
and gritty
undertones.
overshadowed evermore
by their tender flesh of down.
down, soft and fragile
as the unsheathed sky,
a darkness
cut by twinkling
gravities cast afar.
settling on youths
bare
caught in the sound
of the haze rooting
as this night
blooms.
Author's Note:
*Repost* My collab with Nae, I felt badly for removing it, so I made it a priority to return it home.Comments on "Comatose on Cloud Nine (feat. Spikey)"
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A former member wrote:
Well Written! I havnt done a colab in years. Its hard to flow with another poet but this turned out nice.
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A former member wrote:
It's very hard to tell which poet from which, and I enjoy that very much. Knowing Nae and trying to understand her style as well as seeing your previous writes... It makes for a mind boggling process. The merging of two into one. Reverse mitosis. Very beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
wow. good thing it was a repost lol i wlda missed out... awesome both of u
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On Sunday, February 12, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I tried sooo hard to seperate the two beautys and found myself stuck!! That's what makes poetic perfection.. Awesome and damn!!!
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On Sunday, February 12, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
You are an honorable man and you make us all proud as our ambassador, cheers!