Me at you

By elisa

the ache
of his unbroken flesh
within rosary's reach

begs the greed of my grip
to bleed her release

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Published on Sunday, September 1, 2024. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Me at you"

On Tuesday, September 24, 2024, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

You came back! :)
On Wednesday, August 25, 2010, Soldier Of Silence (42) wrote:

...yes please...
A former member wrote: Your poetry and your pictures are soooo very beautiful! I love all that you do.
On Tuesday, November 3, 2009, Phalanx (628) wrote:

What a beautifully wrapped box of hate. You certainly twisted my grin. Makes me want to watch something writhe and scream while it's burning.
On Wednesday, May 13, 2009, Huey Lewis (21) wrote:

this is pretty fuckin hot. dig.
On Friday, April 24, 2009, Riven Waker (317) wrote:

reminds me of haiku - in this short space you used particularly potend phrasing for maximum impact - i am quite impressed
A former member wrote: yes...bleed him with the fire of your words and scratch psalms into his soul for good measure...this was hot.
On Thursday, October 9, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (287) wrote:

Sinfully erotic--lovely, lovely write.
On Thursday, August 21, 2008, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

a very powerful emotion coming thru this piece. i sence that maybe there is a lack of or too much tantric need. very influencial I find it.
A former member wrote: Nice to see you're writing, sexilicious.
A former member wrote: For me, this seems to allow an ambiguity, perhaps... where the release that is begged is desired by him as if ecstasy, but the bleeding convinces me that you have other designs. Does his flesh being within rosary's reach suggest that he has something for which to repent?
On Thursday, August 14, 2008, elisa (1595) wrote:

perhaps ..a passionate penance for the need of want. chaplets beaded claws carving a feast down his spine for her emaciated soul.
A former member wrote: "within rosary's reach"..that held high for me, a constant moving thought robed in anxious sweat.
On Wednesday, August 6, 2008, elisa (1595) wrote:

...lord knows i sweat exercising this demon...
On Tuesday, August 5, 2008, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Mmmmm...This was deliciously horny and spoke to me of 2 people gagging to fuck each other's brains out. Lusty, unholy brilliance. Love it :)
On Tuesday, August 5, 2008, elisa (1595) wrote:

lmao ....*pleads the fifth*
On Wednesday, August 6, 2008, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Hehe :)