purple perversion
By elisa
purple perversion, spun
in a liquid web
of zodiac dreams
seen in between
-duple vision
blinking with
supple eyes-
on either side
of the moving horizon
the violet stylus
woke inside
the ruby iris
color blind of time
the ghostly image
circled itself
in disbelief
of the distant mirror
a blur
in the void of
inner and outer space
a passionate purple
dance
turning elements of spiritual water
into ruby port wine
here, life and death
become simple doors
of
space and time
a three dimensional
res erection
pooling and pulling
the crimson tide
passing through
the mind's eye
waking on the other side
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Copyright 2012 elisa
Published on Tuesday, April 3, 2007.
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On Thursday, February 7, 2013, DePriest
(15) wrote:
I love finding myself lost in a mystical world, lost some place between space and time. Just love this.
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On Thursday, January 26, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
elisa, i absolutely love this. it has a very spiritual feel to it thats very magickal. im faving this, i love reflecting on them. and its just fucking fantastic. nice write!
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A former member wrote:
Excellent poem. I loved it and I am so glad that it was awarded poem of the day. It is very deserving of that! Great write utilizing great imagery. Thank you Elisa!
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On Thursday, January 26, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Damn girl! Got chills... Thank you for being un undercover freak... =)~~ I love that.. And oh so sexy.
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A former member wrote:
Been waiting forever it seems, relatively speaking of course, yo log on one day and see your name next to the POTD, milady. Could not have been more satisfied at the feeling this piece has inspired when at last that long awaited for moment has arrived. Your ability to unsettled the reader with obvious and expert skill never ceases to increase my adoration of you and the long list of perfect 10's residing your workspace. This work does present me with the irresistible temptation to beg of you but one question however. I have to ask, what if MY red is YOUR green though? HAHAHA! :P Congrats, milady, more than deserved.--Draven
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On Saturday, July 28, 2012, elisa
(1595) wrote:
you are my conundrum, Draven. :)
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On Thursday, January 26, 2012, TheProphetUntold
(160) wrote:
So good. If only everyday could hold such a gift as this poem. Awesome work elisa, metaphor, word play, meter, brilliant and beautiful. +tpu+
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A former member wrote:
Cannot fully express how perfectly this unravels from start to finish. A tight flow of well-placed lines. A purple hiss into the deep end. I like that.
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On Friday, January 7, 2011, SulaMoon
(67) wrote:
Truly magnificent! I do love your work.
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A former member wrote:
purple is my favorite color and this is by far my favorite of your works. Your words became like the air I breathed for the span of a moment or two and I'm addicted now. I think I love you... :)
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On Wednesday, May 6, 2009, elisa
(1595) wrote:
wow.. a perfect comment to wake up to. *sends love*
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On Friday, February 8, 2008, SGT Bloth
(162) wrote:
Groovy..I love your style , baby Keep em comming
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On Saturday, December 22, 2007, italianbella
(183) wrote:
deep and beautfully written
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On Monday, November 26, 2007, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
this is one to dive into again and again, magnetic and enticing for the mind.... but then again you never do anything that's half measure.... outstanding
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A former member wrote:
Its nice once in while to move out of my own wading pool and into your deep end.
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On Wednesday, May 9, 2007, jack paper
(121) wrote:
so reminds me of a party i went to one time wehre they were serving everclear mixed with grape coolaid... and this is quite good... i must read more
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On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
trully vivid. you remind me there is still art on this site.
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On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
......you made my day..... much thanks.
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A former member wrote:
I like the way you described the whole dimensional relief, it's rather lovely, the image you're getting in this is very powerful. Keep on writing :)