Gone

By SilentStalker


*written WAY WAY long ago. Never had a reason to post it. but since hearts pour out nowadays, why not mine as well?*




My pain is strong,
For you are gone.
I don't know how
I can go on.

I loved you so.
Why did you go?
Deep down I know
My pain will grow.

I just want you...
...I shall go too.










Darun Ferguson
Period 3
Mrs. Mills
October 16, 1997

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© 2006 Darun Ferguson
Published on Friday, September 8, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wow, this is a beautiful work.

  • A former member wrote: You did a great job in such little words, I kind of liked how dated it was.

  • jjrh187 On Saturday, December 18, 2010, jjrh187 (6)By person wrote:

    A lot of meaning in such little words. I liked it.

  • elisa On Sunday, September 10, 2006, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    i caught a glimpse of my own reflection in this......a soul scar.

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, September 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    knife***

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, September 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    This was very sad even if it was written a long time ago, it was like a deep ragged night that pierced just below the heart to portray more agony onto me~Gothic

  • A former member wrote: simple, yet powerful, it exhibits your pain perfectly. HK

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