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Gone
By SilentStalker
*written WAY WAY long ago. Never had a reason to post it. but since hearts
pour out nowadays, why not mine as well?*
My pain is strong,
For you are gone.
I don't know how
I can go on.
I loved you so.
Why did you go?
Deep down I know
My pain will grow.
I just want you...
...I shall go too.
Darun Ferguson
Period 3
Mrs. Mills
October 16, 1997
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
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© 2006 Darun Ferguson
Comments on "Gone"
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A former member wrote:
Wow, this is a beautiful work.
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A former member wrote:
You did a great job in such little words, I kind of liked how dated it was.
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On Saturday, December 18, 2010, jjrh187
(6)
wrote:
A lot of meaning in such little words. I liked it.
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On Sunday, September 10, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
i caught a glimpse of my own reflection in this......a soul scar.
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On Friday, September 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
knife***
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On Friday, September 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was very sad even if it was written a long time ago, it was like a deep ragged night that pierced just below the heart to portray more agony onto me~Gothic
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A former member wrote:
simple, yet powerful, it exhibits your pain perfectly. HK
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