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Psycho, Analyst
By purr_verse
A) muse, sing
you stupid creature,
or I shall kick you
senseless
and sense less
until the dance is spun like
spiderwebs screaming like
mornings in granite like
torn floral kitchens like
silver perversions like
you should be spinning like
all that I cannot
like
B) wilder meant
Wake up.
Look what's happened.
You made me sink under the
beat (N),
again;
C) sick
and drowning
D) purr.
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© 2006 Natalie Lyndon
Published on Friday, August 18, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
I saw this pop up on the front page, and I was immediately curious. I'm glad that I looked at this, because the visuals that you created were a treat for my mind. Thank you, my dear. Reb:).
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
I agree, VERY cleverly crafted. I enjoyed peering into this Alice and Wonderlandesque depiction. Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, September 7, 2006, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
Wow... utterly original and cleverly crafted. I read this three times and I still don't know what to say. Loved it.
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On Friday, September 1, 2006, Metal Lullaby
(47) wrote:
brilliant
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On Saturday, August 19, 2006, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
*smiles* I'm afraid in my absence i've not really gotten any better at this whole commeting thing. But I think this is wonderful and i've really missed reading your work. Thank you.. this is excellent.. *applauds*
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A former member wrote:
E) N,chan.ting!
"A) muse, sing..." Very E(E)xcellently crafted... I like the cummings style... F)abulous. You are a muse, and your poetry sings... Bravo!!!
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A former member wrote:
p,s: Love the title; very clever.
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A former member wrote:
interesting subject.. the rhythm kicks ass.
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A former member wrote:
Catlady, your purr is ferocious. 3:D
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On Friday, August 18, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
You are a talent to be reckoned with m'dear! WOW purr! I love the blended wording, double meanings! This is definitely a fave! You're awesome love. Julia~
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On Friday, August 18, 2006, Morbid_insanity
(75) wrote:
Its magnifecent its speaks to me. Nice ~Josh
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On Friday, August 18, 2006, blue
(1454) wrote:
damn damn damn!
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A former member wrote:
*grins* this was completly perfect. i love the whole tone of this, and the first stanza totally spun me in circles. wonderful, wonderful write.
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A former member wrote:
you know, you should really post more :)
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A former member wrote:
I'll second that.
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On Friday, August 18, 2006, blue
(1454) wrote:
o.O)) I.. yeah. You rock lady! ~b
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