Masochisms Bliss
By Ravenblade
Touched once by sadisms kiss,
embraced warmly by masochisms bliss,
the taste of desire in all the wounds,
blood soaking my lips in the devouring of you.
Under the warmth of fresh razor slits,
temptation abounds and no more can I resist,
I indulge in the rich red blood
and the tears running down my sides into the mud.
I love the feeling of sorrow and pain,
the things I wait to share with you again.
I perch myself upon the floor,
as I will sip my blood forever more.
This is more than love its my life,
The things I need are arms and a knife.
To escape reality's sick humor,
I will bludgeon myself and pray for a tumor.
I don't do this because I'm sad,
I open my veins because I can,
I love the taste, the feel, the touch,
And never do I do what people say, way too much.
I just want blood, its my closest friend,
after tasting it once I want it not to end.
Bloodshed during sex, all the more desire,
because after its done, we brand with fire.
I love the rush of the heated blade,
but after erotica only, no other way.
Filling a chalice during the play,
with the rich substance, my heart has made.
Comments on "Masochisms Bliss"
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On Thursday, April 18, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Mmmmmm .. this made me wanna taste the sin in your blood.. how appetizing. i thank you raven for reading me and your indepth comments i appreciate it. it is mandatory i return the gesture.. i had no idea of your writing level or depth and i love the darkness yet classy approach.. much love.
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On Friday, April 19, 2013, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
Thank you for that, but I simply write what consumes me. My comments, though few, are always heartfelt and honest. No reciprocation necessary, I assure you.
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A former member wrote:
This was terrific! I had no issues with imagery.
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On Friday, April 5, 2013, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
I gotta say I'm not one for cutting creations... but this piece was executed very well... fantastic wordplay... definitely painted a visual that I wasn't so inclined to turn away from... thanks for the reference and for sharing...-knight
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On Wednesday, February 20, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
good words to describe this, well done...
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2013, Dei
(663) wrote:
this was a very structured poem for a very unstructured act. I have noticed a pattern to your poetry in that you always end with a gasp that causes me two read it twice.
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2010, Myzeray
(16) wrote:
Wow. Just wow my dear! The words hear ring true to my very soul. How you can take and put into words what I have only felt with each strike, each cut, each slice...it's amazing. You've done it to me again sweetheart! Followed this from the front page and was not disappointed. Huzzah.
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On Thursday, November 29, 2007, Winter Born
(169) wrote:
very, very well done. I do belive inspiration has seen me again...
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
"I don't do this because I'm sad, I open my veins because I can" ~you captured my thoughts perfectly~ ~Lauren~
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, sIo
(898) wrote:
i love it.
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On Friday, October 1, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
ohhh dark and lovely...*is slightly turned on *WEG*
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On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
^_^ I love it, you're talented. Blood, yummy *wink* ~Elise
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On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
wow...i mean...wow...you're so amazing, I can understand and relate to every word used...awesome work...(!)
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On Saturday, May 24, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
very well done poem... i'm looking forward to checking out more of your stuff.
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A former member wrote:
i'm in awe..such a strong and compelling poem that kept its effectiveness throughout. nice work!
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, ColdScaredAlone
(77) wrote:
god damn... you have left me inarticulate. you are DEFINATELY one of my new favorites.
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On Sunday, March 23, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Perfectly interesting read, very much enjoyed.
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A former member wrote:
awesome work, bravo
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Great poem. I could actually feel is as I was reading. Keep up the good work. :-)
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A former member wrote:
Oh man im all about it. BEAUTIFUL, my kinda shit right there. Keep it up
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On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
ripping, a good work. i'm kinda intrigued... oooh, look it's a sexually deviant fish!
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On Saturday, May 24, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
fish would be sexually deviant for the right kind of kitty, methinks... ;)
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A former member wrote:
i really feel this and i know what ur saying. i like it
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On Saturday, March 8, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
explains the way a lot of people feel, including some close to me Great Job