Her First Next Door Universe

By purr_verse

In times long ago -

thirty years or so past -

(she tries not to think

of such timescapes these days)

a little girl wanted

oh! everything feline,

so she founded a land

where the catpeople played.



Well, somewhere in Russia

seemed purrfectly fair

The place looked ginormous

and surely as such

That the birthing of kingdoms

full of kittens and wonders

was very quite possibly

not asking too much.



For people seemed often

so dull and demanding

So bossy and noisy

with purposes blurry;

but cats - ah, now, They

were something Quite Magic

So the little girl made

all her subjects more furry.



Her queen was a lady

blondehaired and longwhiskered

with velveteen eyelash

and white fluffy tail;

Shegato by name -

She didn't know meaning,

yet Italian for 'cat'

'gato' means all the same.



And a queen needs a king,

so in sable and greeneyes,

the furlord called Takary

(she didn't know why)

walked along with two brothers,

named Tomas and Tamor,

and with valour resplendent

clawguarded her side.



But her favourite kitties

who danced in the shadows

were the streetwise and earcut

Without pedigree;

Alley Francis their leader,

torn tortie and terror,

with wicked smile wanton

and always wildfree.



And the grey Tabbi-El

with her attitude hissing

(just like the realCats

the girl had at home)

sang her songs on the rooftops -

howlmusic by moonlight -

Of her general greatness

and to leave her Alone.



Still sometimes the streetsnarl

gave way to the manor,

where the beautiful Lily

in softpaws and blue

Held court superregal

Soft purred by the fireplace

And there was no catfeat

that she couldn't do.



And the forested landscape

stood mountainous, cat-charged -

The horizon was purple

with never an end,

Moss-kissed but quite perilous

so she needed a hero -

His name was Diego.

His job was Defend.



So into these furworlds

the little girl ventured,

not taking a step

from her usual home

Her family wandered

around and around her

and they never suspected

she wasn't alone.



(...but her kittenfolk sang

as she catcarved her throne...)



"I'm Tabbi-El

And I'm here to stay

And if you don't want to listen

You can go away.

I'm Tabbi-El

Here in Catland

Get out of my lane

Go play in the sand."





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"Imagination is the eye of the soul." - Joseph Joubert





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Copyright 2004 purr_verse
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  • A former member wrote: Interesting and unique. I like it. :)

  • hate_doll On Saturday, April 3, 2004, hate_doll (263)By person wrote:

    this is enchanting! your imagination is brilliant! when i do let fantasies and dreams take hold, i always wish i was i was a cat...heh...i love this dearly...

  • sulkylime On Saturday, April 3, 2004, sulkylime (191)By person wrote:

    your images danced in my mind like animation.. i must say i loved it as much as i love cats. (call me a fellow catlover, purr!)

  • sole On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, sole (93)By person wrote:

    I hate CATS! But I loved this poem, so I suppose I'll set aside my cat-contempt and subject myself to this creatively furry landscape. Great work~

  • purr_verse On Thursday, March 18, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    hehheh. Heretic. >:) seriously, thank you for reading this and enjoying it even though you are a confessed (ack!) CatHater...

  • BoldSolitude On Sunday, March 7, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this, but don't all cats think they're royalty, you might have a mutiny on your hands? :) Cats are funny with all their different personalities, you described it well.

  • manicheism On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, manicheism (43)By person wrote:

    very captivating and incredibly creative. i quite enjoy your work.

  • Solace On Thursday, February 26, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Bah i read it, I enjoyed it...repeat fellow dp sentiments here :P I'm in an un original mood, also tired and lazy :)

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, February 25, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I want to be Diego. And I will defend the Land, but before I do... will you please scratch behind my ears. I loved it purr! :::OLd

  • birdwell On Sunday, February 22, 2004, birdwell (138)By person wrote:

    just...magical, that's all i can say ~db~

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Saturday, February 21, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    beautiful imagery, awesome piece, I was intrieged from beggining to end, great job here ~Emptyness~

  • A former member wrote: You did a wonderful job of almost convincing me that cats aren't evil:) This was very fairy tailish and I loved every minute of it. ~Ship!

  • purr_verse On Sunday, February 22, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    My cats are perfectly capable of evil. It is one of their great qualities. >:) Sort of. (love 'fairy tailish' by the way!)

  • Loneal On Thursday, February 19, 2004, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    A nice get-away land - love the way you bring your cats to life! Great write and hope to read more! :) ~L

  • cre On Thursday, February 19, 2004, cre (410)By person wrote:

    Completely enchanting . . . and beautifully written.

  • A former member wrote: ''purrfectly fair!, where the catpeople played" / '...with never an end, Moss-kissed but quite perilous...' This fun poem is catcarved into my furr; purr... and I'll Defend against any who state otherwise that this is a splendid poem! I must go pet a ki

  • A former member wrote: ''purrfectly fair!, this splendid poem! I must go pet a kitty now... 'ginormous and surely as such ...' Ginormous! And lovely as such...

  • _Andrew_ On Thursday, February 19, 2004, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    this was a very enjoyable "little" piece, haha. this write was very good, thanks for the read.

  • A former member wrote: Oh goodness...this is above and beyond. Cat purffect! An amazing tale and so very delightful to read.

  • A former member wrote: an absolute delight to read, the smile never left my face the whole time i read, i felt like a little girl again myself

  • capt_funguy On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    i finished my first "cat" poem today , read your work , and threw mine in the trash ,,, it's just not fair ,, you must've been blind when you were born , cause this is a little too good... get fleas ... funguy

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    This is a great piece, I really enjoyed reading it. Very original, nice work. ~L

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    this is such a sweet imaginitive piece...made me smile...always your talent is unsurpassable...the world needs more beautiful people like you...-l-

  • Drea On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    ooooooh, so beautiful Purr. This took me to another time. I loved this. I agree with Six. ~Drea~

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    what a place...I have images from TS Elliot and Tad Williams running through my head. And your shelf of cat models from your old bedroom. :) FF

  • A former member wrote: Tad Williams; I've always been interested in reading his books solely based off the covers and some quick reading... 'recommended?'

  • purr_verse On Thursday, February 19, 2004, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    Apart from his very impressive Dragonbone Chair fantasy series, he has a truly beautiful catbook called Tailchaser's Song...and yes.very.yes recommended. :) purr

  • flying_fox On Thursday, February 19, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    Williams also has another called Caliban's Hour...yes, a follow-up from Shakespeare's 'The Tempest' which is quite good. FF

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Quite the enjoyable write Miss Verse. Kept me interested from start to end, very few lenghty ones can do that. Bravo. ;)

  • A former member wrote: Ahh, purr! ^-^ This is muchly lovely. So enriching and pleasing! It's just so cute I want to wrap it up in my arms! But since that would be rather... difficult, I'll just favour it! ~Wish Upon A Star


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