Boudoir Requiem
By purr_verse
In this chaos smiling sweetly
In this hellhole call my name,
My voice, my love, my deadly ally,
Pride and joy and secret shame
You love to love like Aphrodite,
Love to love like death's caress,
Touch and smile and promise always
true and so you seem the best
of all the choices, all the time,
All the beauty, all the dreams,
Then kiss of farewell, wave goodbye,
Another's bed to lose the screams
And in this chaos you deliver
In this hellhole I exist
And in your world I feature slightly
Playing darling masochist
And you keep saying how you need me,
You keep lying, you destroy,
And I can't stop you from this torture
Bringing on the death of joy
but there's a limit, dearest darling,
to my pointless trust pursuit,
So take your bedtime stories elsewhere,
My sweetest demon prostitute
So in this chaos I don't want you
In this hellhole ripped and torn
And memory, my only saviour,
doesn't listen any more.
Comments on "Boudoir Requiem"
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On Saturday, February 6, 2010, scarletara
(58) wrote:
love gone bad...i love the imagery, the words u used...great lines that burn n my brain...excellent beauty from ur pain...
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On Saturday, June 30, 2007, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
I'm so glad that Peri commented on this today, otherwise it might be an old work lost in the archives. I love the fourth stanza especially. Amazingly written. --Jes
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On Saturday, June 30, 2007, Berry Fantastic
(28) wrote:
awesome awesome awesome. that's all i have to say, this was very cool.
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On Thursday, May 19, 2005, Trail of Fiends
(37) wrote:
Great flow and I loved this part "So take your bedtime stories elsewhere, My sweetest demon prostitute". Keep up with the excellent work.
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A former member wrote:
everyone has said it flows very nicely and i must agree. it just leaves me in awe. truly its a wonder, as are you. kt~
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A former member wrote:
Impressing. Full of power in its senzuality. Beautiful.
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
a certain sadness in this piece. i love the flow of this poem. could feel the emotions and depth of it. very pure and raw. awesome! :)
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A former member wrote:
I especially like the second stanza
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
einfach wundervoll meine Gottheit ;)
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On Sunday, March 7, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
This brought a somewhat wicked smile to my face, the line "Another's bed to lose the screams" is worth a whole verse of words
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A former member wrote:
'So take your bedtime stories elsewhere, My sweetest demon prostitute' This is of the voice from a true poet...'And I can't stop you from this torture' nor would I try...
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On Friday, November 28, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
and i lie next to her and the skin, beginning at where we'd been rubbing grows a great grey callous and spreads from our heart to our heads and we realize one doesn't even know the other, oh how i wish we could be other people
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
all in all this was a great write. Flowed wonderfully, excellent content- Awesome title. :::OLd
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
wow, vary good, i love the way it flowed, imgoing to ead more of your work.~~~Grave
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
ohh I enjoyed reading this very much . . the flow and rhyme is absolutely fantastic . . great write.
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A former member wrote:
Yes, what Cre said. It flowed so nicely.
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Liked the flow....& the ending seemed to grab me and throw me...the whole effect was great...nicely done.
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Crying_Banshee
(62) wrote:
waw very nice...i liked the rythme...good job! *~mutilated archangel~*