Faces
By TropicalSnowstorm
Their faces
never seem to be quite in focus, but I can see their hands and feet.
Bronzed fingers pulling on my pant
legs and pointing toward things they cannot yet name,
curls moving like soap bubbles sliding
along invisible ribbons before a final pirouette.
Ancient tribal sounds rise as two
drummers play goat skins at 110 beats per minute,
the rhythm enveloping, filling,
teething, casting oracle visions in random bursts of colour.
A room decorated with stencils,
sea animals, outlet covers, cushions for sharp corners,
prepared lovingly, if a bit manically,
anticipating twin sets of limbs crawling in all directions.
Neighborhood playgrounds, bodies
arching through the air from swings into waiting sand below,
brushing off palms against shirt
tails as legs pump rapidly toward the steps to a slide.
Waves of sound pushing toward the
do-I-look-pretty’s, first dates, college applications,
band posters replacing sea animals
and covering stencils, inexorably ending with an empty room.
Bronzed fingers wrapped around wine
glasses, entering the what-do-I-do-now’s, sharing stories,
enjoying time, lingering together
on the porch even as it is becoming too cold to be out there.
Crushing silence strangles the rhythm,
surprising in its pitiless abruptness, permeating, final,
dispersing the images into vapor
as I am left standing at the center of a half-finished room.
A floor covered in drop clothes,
paint cans, fabric samples, unrealized experiences,
and I think how much they would
have loved it here, while mourning the never-will-be’s.
Their hands swing as their feet
carry them away from me, and I will never see their faces.
--- by Steve McKennon, 8/7/13
Comments on "Faces"
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On Monday, March 9, 2015, heinzlet
(25) wrote:
Wow, I felt as if I were reading John Updike, that typical yet epic short story ending, gradually leading into a mind-blowing conclusion of life itself. I really liked this one, thank you for sharing:)
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On Wednesday, December 3, 2014, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
I feel this dull ache. Sprinkled with loneliness. And all of that wrapped in the beauty of seeing the world keep moving. It's beautiful.
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On Sunday, September 14, 2014, Drayvinio
(19) wrote:
Simply lovely. So vivid.
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A former member wrote:
Amazing....what I wouldn't do to write like this...you have a gift...I love this...
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
Beautiful in its sad bed. I feel it creeping in! Brilliant work brother! It's been a long while since I've come here to read, your's are always among my favorites. Never stop!
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On Thursday, August 8, 2013, Chalin
(16) wrote:
TS~ Your new work made my heart ache. Kept imagining my new baby girl, just 9 months old. How I prepared her room and imagined the coming years. The work successfully communicated the esoteric feelings of hope and sadness when something is anticipated and lost before it was ever held. Happy to see you are still writing! Hugs!
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Your author's note helped to define this over-powering sense of loss. Keep the memories close - they are our treasures, cheers!
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A former member wrote:
you really descibe everything in this poem very well I feel like I am there and experiencing this with the writer I enjoyed reading this poem
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...cycles of life, & you fill them elegantly w/the colors of music, changing scenery, evolving priorities, & the final limping away...
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Stunning. I don't know where to start or stop if I am to give this praise.