Barely Verdant Prison

By lupus tenebrae

 



A distant white remainder
of December’s end;
its barely verdant prison, like spring,

is fleeting
yet its

afterglow reflects an empty sky,
just like the day
we last met.

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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Published on Tuesday, April 28, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Something I jotted down returning to a familiar place.
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  • A former member wrote: So much said in so little.. that takes talent to have such a profound effect on a piece the way this is. The title is perfect for this. Nice job.

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    I agree with Dev, this was breathtaking. You never disappoint :)

  • Devilish On Tuesday, June 4, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    You know what.. everytime you post i know it's gonna be perfection. you settle for nothing less. i would bet you are your own critic and there is never a need to do anything but comment how amazing you are.. Scholar

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