Hillview's Younger Facets

By lupus tenebrae

 



Hillview‘s horizon , another hill-view;
formless, swirling in white, still formless,
puzzles, her pieces of blue sky puzzles,
green reemerging, patina, yet green.

Grey, love’s confessions, married in the grey,
branch to be tinder; bear rings, aging branch,
chains graduate to a choir of chains.
Breathless, fauna, stolen away; breathless.

Black without colour, departing in black,
describes warped mahogany. It describes
grid iron tarnish at night, off the grid,
lonely at the top, wind howling, lonely,

red beneath varnish, blushing veils of red,
purple abandon; bruises match purple. 

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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, January 23, 2013.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Sometimes, the only way to deal with your own feelings, is personify them with something else, say, a fenced off park ground. Written in shadow sonnet, which doesn't have to follow typical sonnet rules.
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  • dwells On Wednesday, January 23, 2013, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Aw Wolfie, I felt each line delving into something else, and the tress do have a story to tell, thanks.

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