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Too Obvious for Metaphor
By lupus tenebrae
A semblance to a past
of injured
butterflies and
lace,
too obvious for metaphor
…
…
save face.
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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Published on Thursday, January 10, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Something I never posted from my more experimental days, a style I called tele-verse; using a random phone number as a syllable count.Comments on "Too Obvious for Metaphor"
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On Thursday, January 10, 2013, deathndismay
(92)
wrote:
Though I am not the poet you are, I am striving to understand a televerse composition... This intrigued me for the different ways that I interperated it... 10/10 Thanks for the mind boggle!!
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On Thursday, January 10, 2013, Dei
(663) wrote:
this was a pretty snapshot. that's neat about the televerse. ive never heard of that before
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On Thursday, January 10, 2013, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Well, I made it up on the spot, and it hasn't gotten out until now. It was a fun idea, maybe some future applications. Thank you, Astra.
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