Too Obvious for Metaphor

By lupus tenebrae

 



A semblance to a past

of injured butterflies and 

lace,

too obvious for metaphor





save face. 

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Copyright 2013 lupus tenebrae
Published on Thursday, January 10, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Something I never posted from my more experimental days, a style I called tele-verse; using a random phone number as a syllable count.
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  • deathndismay On Thursday, January 10, 2013, deathndismay (93)By person wrote:

    Though I am not the poet you are, I am striving to understand a televerse composition... This intrigued me for the different ways that I interperated it... 10/10 Thanks for the mind boggle!!

  • Dei On Thursday, January 10, 2013, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    this was a pretty snapshot. that's neat about the televerse. ive never heard of that before

  • lupus tenebrae On Thursday, January 10, 2013, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    Well, I made it up on the spot, and it hasn't gotten out until now. It was a fun idea, maybe some future applications. Thank you, Astra. Scholar

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