Black in Friday's Silhouette

By lupus tenebrae

 



In touching base with every word,
       their luminescent white is heard
through poinsettias and all unknown,
       and Friday lights that feel at home.
Cream dares, calling coffee black, in its careful trace,
silhouettes talk poetry, laugh…in touching base.

In saving me, a simple girl,
       could seem familiar in a world
where passing glances, aisle two,
       can mean the same, as breathing you.
Pausing, for a brief refrain, in a verse, we’ll be;
intermingled fingers, that clasp…in saving me. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Friday, November 23, 2012.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

In the silhouette of this particular day, a person's true character is shown, for better or worse. My second wrapped refrain.
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  • A former member wrote: I gave it a ten I love the flow of this poem it so natural and the form is excellent I enjoyed reading this poem

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful poetry, you've just inspired and reminded me of what it's all about. xx

  • Alchemist On Friday, November 23, 2012, Alchemist (688)By person wrote:

    You are the most poetic around, your words have such impact and scope. I'm sure they mean many things to different people. I pictured a frenzied strip-mall romance that is so much more than lust of capitalism but love from the greed needs bring.

  • Strataic On Friday, November 23, 2012, Strataic (100)By person wrote:

    Awesome, format and and meaning, Can't really top the other comments, great read thank you. Scholar

  • dwells On Friday, November 23, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    My wife like to tell me that I'm channeling Hillary Clinton sometimes (HA!). Really enjoyed the different perspective and format, cheers Wolfie!

  • PoetessDarkly On Friday, November 23, 2012, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    wow I feel honored to be the first to comment. this is so lovely and dark... exactly my cup of whisky

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