Lying Steel Guitar

By lupus tenebrae

 




Play me off on steel guitar
coolness in a centigrade,
sly and sleek as a lying tongue

Stood at the edge of Eden,
wanting one last jamboree,
play me off on steel guitar.

Fahrenheit descending
in a glass of crisp nostalgia,
coolness in a centigrade.

Fiddle bows are slick and sheen
when fraying through their love songs,
sly and sleek as a lying tongue. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Tuesday, August 28, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Written a month or so back, I must have been feeling somewhat nostalgic again.
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  • A former member wrote: Your writing is on very mature level...you have an old school way about your style but it is always fresh & relevant. I like the nostalgic pieces. Read with much pleasure, as always.

  • DarkAsh On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, DarkAsh (45)By person wrote:

    I like this one, mind you I'm a sucker for anything musical and well written...

  • dwells On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Last stanza was my fav, "while my guitar gently weeps (unk)". Cheers, no frets!

  • HeadpatSlut On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    the Guitar is the sword of the modern Skald Scholar

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