Beauty in disorder

By Rebel tiGer King

There was something about her
that day.

Maybe it was that wrinkle in her dress,
Right above the thighs.

Maybe it was the sweat smudging her eye liner,
the left eye to be exact.

Or perhaps it was the stain on her blouse,
she had a hot dog for lunch.

Or it could've been her hair tangled,
it was very windy that day.

I don't know what it was,
She looked like hell.

But she damn sure stole my heart.

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© 2008 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Thursday, July 3, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: ......................damn you, making me cry...and ..........

  • Narcissa On Friday, July 4, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    Now thats what I call love. :)

  • carlosjackal On Thursday, July 3, 2008, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    This was spot-on brilliant :) Nice one, Bro =)

  • The Lipstick Factor On Thursday, July 3, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    Okay--where exactly do we find guys like you? This is a lovely tribute to honest to god love...nicely done!

  • Rebel tiGer King On Thursday, July 3, 2008, Rebel tiGer King (258)By person wrote:

    well see thats the thing, there's only one me :D -symph-

  • A former member wrote: That's about as real as it gets, no lipstick or rouge required...just honest to god love.

  • A former member wrote: Reminds me of Delight in Disorder... now was that by Herrick, I think so... sometimes I confuse Herrick with Herbert though the latter was metaphysical and the former cavalier... not much in common besides the 'H's. Just think of all the disappointed souls who think beauty resides only in perfection... how they must pine for the pristine. be well!

  • Rebel tiGer King On Friday, July 4, 2008, Rebel tiGer King (258)By person wrote:

    Yes sir Ainsof, inspired by Delight in Disorder, fueled by my muse of course in many a ways, -symph-

  • A former member wrote: finding perfection in imperfections.. not many can see that.. and i know your eye sight very well..:D this is lovely.

  • elisa On Thursday, July 3, 2008, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    you certainly set the bar very very high.

  • A former member wrote: awwh tiger thats cute.

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