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Meaning Less
By purr_verse
I have started several times
and deleted, deleted
deleted
because I cannot do what you do;
I cannot escape my two cages -
my mundanity and
my Underworld -
to find wild&marvellous inspiration
in anyeverything.
Or,
at least,
i cannot express it properly.
No,
my cages are locked tight -
I am me
or I am a million.
Actually,
more precisely,
I am 153;
none of whom are me,
and at this moment
it seems
they are all asleep.
I do not tell
a good story
like you do -
again and again -
and
again,
nobody will know
what the hell
I
actually
mean.
What's the damn point
of imaginary worlds
if they won't do
as they're told?
Leviathan, speak to me.
If you keep this up,
I'll have to admit
that I don't make
much of a goddess;
and that would make
154 of me
quite
meaningless.
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© 2007 Natalie Lyndon
Published on Saturday, March 24, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Meaning Less"
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A former member wrote:
im actually mesmerized by this peice...it gives me alot of thoughts on my feelings aswell...ty
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A former member wrote:
I followed the poem of the day to this :) So glad I did. What an engrossing and wildly captivating write. Your way is so intelligent, so thoughtful, so contemporary and yet, I feel undertones with all these myths and bones. A most excellent piece.
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On Sunday, April 22, 2007, Jonas
(720)
wrote:
nod to your words that remind me of three in the morning lost in thought and chasing sleep
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A former member wrote:
I understood this. Well done
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On Monday, April 2, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
smitten. nothing i write will do service to this piece.
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On Sunday, April 1, 2007, carlosjackal
(3015) wrote:
Absolutely, bloomin', bloomin', bloomin' brilliant!! This was inspiring to read and satisfied the intellect at the same time. Purr_fect!
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On Saturday, March 31, 2007, birdwell
(140) wrote:
i know this feeling.. you've painted it purrfectly ~db~
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On Monday, March 26, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Inspiration is so easy to find, but even after you've found it, the hard part is writing inspired. This was great. Writing inspired about lack of inspiration, maybe. "What's the point..." That section was beautiful. Write on.
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On Sunday, March 25, 2007, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
like monet wishing he could .." draw tippy ".. i'm puzzled by this 154 times... you are telling a story, and i do know what you mean. if leviathan doesn't answer, call out to -
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On Sunday, March 25, 2007, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
gargantua, kong, the kraken ..or any of the other giants inside of you ... if i'm totally off base, just take it as high praise from an idiot - funguy
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A former member wrote:
"I cannot escape my two cages" and that Poe-like tinntinabulation beat of "deleted, deleted deleted / again and again -and again" but this prose_verse is all you. And only you can speak with your own creations: "Leviathan..." as your sense, your pen,..
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On Saturday, March 24, 2007, Rebel_not_Radical
(78) wrote:
~"Leviathan, speak to me"...that line's just awesome...meaning less and meaningless, a reflection of the persona's self...I can sense the feeling of being consumed...
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A former member wrote:
"Leviathan, speak to me". Yes, sir, you have captured exactly what is meant inside this "two cages" piece... "in anyeverything." The numbers, of course, are the myth, the eldritch enigma... a superbly poetic work which means more than less, for certain...
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