Comments by Rebel_not_Radical
- "You're a very promising writer, being 14 and all...you have a natural talent for expressing your feelings and writing in a lyrical and solemn sort of way...i like the rhythm and the feel...although the poem could've worked without the sticky caps in the end...cool write though...welcome to DP"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Can i be your Juliet?" by BethanyBallet
- "what mr. anth had said had been dead on...in my near post-teen life crisis, the angst in this piece and the scope of the poem really got to me...very cool"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "monet would vomit." by Six-Out
- "religion was mandated by politicians who sought to have a middle ground amongst their people...and religion is always in the trouble of arguing the divine from the human...pretty much everything is two-sided when it's about religion, that's why it's very hard to write about it...but this is a strong piece, opinionated without fear of judgment or approval/disapproval of others...the cynical touch makes it witty...i liked it...very cool"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "If I were a Christ and other religious contemplations" by freudian-slip
- "Lives are interconnected in a cosmic sort of comedy/tragedy...but never lose hope...yeah, we all feel so fucked up at times, but when we are at the bottom of the deepest well...all we can see is the light above...a courageous post, all respects for you man...very cool"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Feeling Sorry For Myself" by johntaiyu
- "Hmm well the type who are "strictly-business" always seem to have this cold pessimism around them...weird but true..."
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "a poem" by WhoIAM
- "hmm quite amusing really...has a drunken feel then suddenly the scene pans out to a starbucks joint...the idiosyncratic today in contrast with the old western...cool write"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine
- "~short and succulent...i liked this one, it rhymes but not tedious...it emanates something, some feeling that i don't quite get a hold of...still nice write, cool"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "I was never her" by prettydisgrace
- "~sometimes there are just things that limit you because it is what you have at your disposal (in your case being a soul in the rock) but maybe because it's fate or something like that...who knows maybe you'll find your soulmate because of that..."
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "silent crashing" by NikesRain
- "~"Leviathan, speak to me"...that line's just awesome...meaning less and meaningless, a reflection of the persona's self...I can sense the feeling of being consumed..."
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Meaning Less" by purr_verse
- "~there's a rushing feeling that comes with reading this poem, really great that it accompanies the message of helplessness and despair...cool write"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Enough" by Aethelwyne
- "~very simplistic and lyrical and nature yet still evokes the feeling and elevates the soul...this was something amazing, ill be reading your posts...very cool write"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "Forgotten Lands" by RhymeBound
- "~undescribable...i just want to keep this poem for myself...haha how selfish of me...but really this is just one cool write...unlike all your other works this seems to be simple yet still packing that poetic punch...very cool"
Posted by Rebel_not_Radical on "becoming poetry" by purr_verse
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