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p..i....e..c....e..s
By elisa
i am drowning
in punctuation's
a mere
textile voice
screaming through the screen -longing to be naked
.
do my words even make a sound.....as you read them -?-
trace my silhouette
and make me tangible
in your reality
your touch -my air
and i need to breathe
so desperately
.
please...
don't let me die
this way.
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Copyright 2011 elisa
Published on Friday, February 10, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
This is a marvelous piece.. I love it.. wow.. 10/10
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On Tuesday, September 18, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303)
wrote:
Brutal, painful, beautiful. Much like yourself.
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On Wednesday, November 30, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Wow!!! I'm addicted...
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A former member wrote:
Bows to you, as you painted a vived picture of your pain, so elegant laced in silk... "Applause" as you moved my soul dramatically...
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A former member wrote:
if only there were a way to make tangible those meanings that move us the most...... hmmm. so many deaths haunting these halls. *bows before the altar of elisa*
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A former member wrote:
I love the way you brought me into it. The you becomes less of some vague person and more of a personal "me" when you say "as you read them." I fuckin loved it!
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On Sunday, November 8, 2009, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Yes! :0)
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On Monday, November 20, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
concise and darkly intelligent
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
''screaming through the screen-longing to be naked.do my words even make a sound.....as you read them-?-trace my silhouette...'(there is *so*much spoken with.in this...
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
such potent; yet vulnerable unmasking...the first part of this...how it bleeds into the rest...flows through such (e)motion...deeply.moving,much felt...:.
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On Saturday, September 16, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
Beautiflly written. It feels so sad.. Good job!
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On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
you have really outdone yourself with this one...maybe we are destined to drown in our own poetry... ~lauren~
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A former member wrote:
"do my words even make a sound.....as you read them -?-" Yes. Yes they do.
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On Monday, February 13, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
*sigh*......
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On Friday, February 10, 2006, BlackBear
(12) wrote:
I hear you through the ether, see the shadow of your scream; the air you grasp in vacuum is not a dying dream. I hear you. Lift your head and see the sun, and share your passionate song with us.
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On Friday, February 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Elisa this gave me tears! Broke my heart and left it in "pieces." It will be okay, you will see. *hugs you tightly* Julia~
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