p..i....e..c....e..s

By elisa

i am drowning
in punctuation's

a mere
textile voice
screaming through the screen -longing to be naked
.
do my words even make a sound.....as you read them -?-

trace my silhouette
and make me tangible
in your reality

your touch -my air
and i need to breathe
so desperately
.
please...
don't let me die
this way.

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Published on Friday, February 10, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "p..i....e..c....e..s"

A former member wrote: This is a marvelous piece.. I love it.. wow.. 10/10
On Tuesday, September 18, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

Brutal, painful, beautiful. Much like yourself.
On Wednesday, November 30, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Wow!!! I'm addicted...
A former member wrote: Bows to you, as you painted a vived picture of your pain, so elegant laced in silk... "Applause" as you moved my soul dramatically...
A former member wrote: if only there were a way to make tangible those meanings that move us the most...... hmmm. so many deaths haunting these halls. *bows before the altar of elisa*
A former member wrote: I love the way you brought me into it. The you becomes less of some vague person and more of a personal "me" when you say "as you read them." I fuckin loved it!
On Sunday, November 8, 2009, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Yes! :0)
On Monday, November 20, 2006, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

concise and darkly intelligent
On Sunday, November 19, 2006, AniDayz (812) wrote:

''screaming through the screen-longing to be naked.do my words even make a sound.....as you read them-?-trace my silhouette...'(there is *so*much spoken with.in this...
On Sunday, November 19, 2006, AniDayz (812) wrote:

such potent; yet vulnerable unmasking...the first part of this...how it bleeds into the rest...flows through such (e)motion...deeply.moving,much felt...:.
On Saturday, September 16, 2006, Bluegirl (177) wrote:

Beautiflly written. It feels so sad.. Good job!
On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212) wrote:

you have really outdone yourself with this one...maybe we are destined to drown in our own poetry... ~lauren~
A former member wrote: "do my words even make a sound.....as you read them -?-" Yes. Yes they do.
On Monday, February 13, 2006, elisa (1595) wrote:

*sigh*......
On Friday, February 10, 2006, BlackBear (12) wrote:

I hear you through the ether, see the shadow of your scream; the air you grasp in vacuum is not a dying dream. I hear you. Lift your head and see the sun, and share your passionate song with us.
On Friday, February 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653) wrote:

Elisa this gave me tears! Broke my heart and left it in "pieces." It will be okay, you will see. *hugs you tightly* Julia~