*unwritten
By elisa
*the drugs
may have pushed me over the edge
but by that time
i was begging for death
escape proved to be futile
and besides
i would never settle for running
just to live
barely breathing
i raged
at the wall coming down
on me
i acted
in response to your action
my destruction
will never be undone,
it will simply be, forever.
a blanket of scars wrapped
around a beautiful moon
a God sent secret
seen only with patience in mind
and compassion in heart
this will be
my late
warning
to those who play the people as pawns
these
roman games are coming
to an end
even though you won't
know it
until it's too late, i promise.
.
..
.
.
i, the host
have already taken
the stage
you, the disorderly mob,
do you really
think you are chasing me
just because i am running toward the
door...?
(laugh)
i told you
no
escape.
(doors lock)
no witnesses
no crime.
*unwritten
Comments on "*unwritten"
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On Sunday, January 9, 2011, Nixx
(235) wrote:
this is awesome. beautifully written as always. love the style!
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On Saturday, February 4, 2006, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
damn.. this read so matter of fact, strong and exacting.. not raging or loud but purposeful and 'this is how it is'... the second section reached out and struck me so intensely...
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On Saturday, February 4, 2006, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
you always make me stop and slow down, think and read carefully and the emotions just breaks so gently against the shore...
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A former member wrote:
this was so intense.."a blanket of scars wrapped around a beautiful moon a God left secret seen only with patience in mind and compassion in heart"- these words tore beautifully. you are absolutely wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
Wow not sure what to say to this. Intense and felt though I probably relate in a different sense of what you were conveying. ~Ship!
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On Monday, January 23, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
we might just be relating it the same way, Ship.
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A former member wrote:
I believe I've done myself an injustice (as well as you, mayhaps) by not indulging more in your words.. this poetry is very much alive. I've pored over this countless times and my nerves are still on end..
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A former member wrote:
..electric, heavyhitting.. exceptionally well written. The fullthrottleimpact left me stumbling over my self. I am sorry to hear this is your last post, if it is, indeed.
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On Monday, January 23, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
*claps wildly* WOW! Elisa this is brilliant. Perfectly brilliant! Julia~