i want this to hurt.
By elisa
even a simple surface cut is felt with extreme
as flesh makes a distinct sound when it tears
with a lingual pain
of single cell screams in separation
open a vein of communication
and
listen to the thick voice of agony
.
hidden deep in the mind
is a running memory of mothers brutal existence
caught in the cold
steel blades of every scissor division
ripped from her insides
[out]
her mind tries to rationalize the fray wire connection
this is 'life'
...still her body struggles not to let go
.
.
eventually, the ache will break her down
killing her womb - decades before her suffering brings death
to an end [in her] never beginning...again.
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Copyright 2005 elisa
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On Tuesday, December 10, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I fucking love you . this is so personal . something i would of never expected to see. i am honored. thank you . your delicate way of expressing trauma sends chills down my spine. wow elisa. it's nice to see something completely different then what i would of expected.. bows to you.
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On Tuesday, December 10, 2013, haunted
(837) wrote:
wow, very dark and delicious. this sounds like a hard place to be, and does justice for your title. awesome elisa!
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A former member wrote:
I think in commenting something will be lost in the translation, seems extremely personal and I'm not sure I could really touch that but just know it was read and appreciated. ~Ship!
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On Friday, July 29, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
I'm at a loss for words... it's beautiful, yet terrible...
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On Friday, July 29, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
hell this is terrifying i've been cut in unspeakable places and i'm leaking on the floor.
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On Thursday, July 28, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
wow. this is phenomenal. the flow wasn't broken and harsh to the eyes, it had a steady rip to the rhythm. wonderful piece.
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On Thursday, July 28, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
hmmm.. I don't think I've grasped this one. Abortion? ~b
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On Thursday, July 28, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
no, not abortion......to many 16 year olds obsessed with that subject around here.....i like to beat there parents to death with there severed remains............this is a graphic image of what i watch my mother go through.
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On Thursday, July 28, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
some woman never recover from postpartum depression.....i've stuggled to understand why.......she was grieving the loss of her own life.....like the birth of the baby left a void that could never be filled.....if that makes any sense..
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On Thursday, July 28, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
got it! thanks Elisa :)