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Shhhhtttttt……
By diavolessa
Shhhhtttttt……
Be still and… with the lights close your eyes, while slowly the train
of memories and illusions leaves, on the binaries of your meaningless existence.
The wind breaths outside the window of this room with an erotic rhythm,
while it gets drunk with the abundant poverty of my soul. You are not around.
You, in great silence sleep outside, while I, I carry myself on the bumpy
road of your desire of staying anonymous.
Shhhhhttttt……
… I am trying to capture your heartbeats from the distance. I do not
know who is by your side; I do now know who tastes your lips. Or are you
in the company of a star?
But stars do not stay on in the morning, and I haven’t touched you since
last night.
With the light I close my eyes, your image made of phosphor solves in the
darkness of these lines.
Shhhhhttttt…
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Copyright 2003 darkside
Published on Tuesday, March 11, 2003.
Filed under:
"Essay"
Comments on "Shhhhtttttt……"
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On Friday, May 6, 2005, AniDayz
(820)
wrote:
w-o-w---im speechlessssss...tho i could ramble on&on about the wonders of this, the depth[s]...[wow]...SHHHHTTTTT...i'll keep the word from falling out of my open mouth in incoherent speech...just know this amazes me...beyond.words.
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On Friday, May 6, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
beautiful write. love the way you write ~*~TArt~*~
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On Sunday, September 19, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
very intriguing write if i do say so myself..i enjoyed this from beggining to end...****-knight
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On Monday, November 17, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
your soul is bound with an innate sense, i feel so much when i read your prose.........you should be so proud......urban
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On Thursday, March 27, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
the quiet compells me to remember times of less silence and more warmth... trembling in both instances but somehow i find more depth in your absence
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On Wednesday, March 12, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
very good, i enjoyed reading this.
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On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
i agree with the T.S. ... i guess i wounldn't have noticed either if he hadn't pointed it out .... but anyways ... like your other pieces ... very interesting and all around entertaining to read ...
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On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I like this one - the second section is especially well-phrased. Intriguing notion to parallel to a star. Ciao, T/S
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