i think
By elisa
*i sigh a grain of patience*
the break down
as
it goes
[ignorance]
an assuming approach
with a pre-concluded tone
glass eyes
glossed
mirror ready
to reflect the image
[believed]
of what
you chose to [not] see
of me
i think
'what do
you want from me'
i still my pithy plea
i think
'don't judge me'
...of no avail...
i brace
my waning patience
as your predetermined words
take
the stage
[reluctantly]
i think
'Action...........queue
the dummies lips!'
*segue*
'roll sound script'
i hear
the imbecilic dictum
drivel thick with condescension
i think
'i don't want to play today'
the spotlight waits
like a dim bulb
brimming with thoughts
of being clever
i pause
in a humming state
i think
'you think you know
me...'
Comments on "i think"
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On Saturday, September 23, 2017, Dimensions
(94) wrote:
A very intelligent write. Im impressed and a bit envious...love it. I look forward to reading more from you.
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On Saturday, September 23, 2017, Just Dave
(448) wrote:
What can I say that hasn't already been commented on below. Wonderful write. JD
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On Wednesday, April 18, 2012, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
you never dissapoint.... this makes me grin, and chuckle.... is that bad?
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On Wednesday, April 18, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Fuck yeah! i dont wana play today.. i fuckin love it.
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On Wednesday, December 16, 2009, Joey
(30) wrote:
It's beautiful. I do love it :3
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
I feel no remorse in judging you. *holds up a card with the number 7* ~queue predetermined blah-bollox~ "wonderful, really great, plethora, rah"
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On Saturday, September 17, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
~queue condescension~ "i really love this... you remind me of my style a few years ago when i was still learning how to write. Come and read my stuff now."
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On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
great write. Lots of emotion and meaning. I love it ~*~Tart~*~
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Green-eyed Raven
(54) wrote:
An wonderful write, emotion filled and honest. I like.
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On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
oh wow this is so wonderful...in so many ways---just astounding write...amazingly set up and spoken..ahhh..i cant think of the right thing to say...
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On Tuesday, February 15, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Captivating write, I was really drawn into this, very beautiful write. Well described and written.
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A former member wrote:
an amazing plethora of uniquely worded thought