Leitmotif
By purr_verse
Wild, wild the dance
with blazing passion, move me
quick-step, pulse/eight to the bar
music master,
4-play me, now, faster, and
scherzo
(fly!)
glissando
(glide)
fall soft and in sibilance
velveteen dissonance
sigh
slide
in waves of sensation
waltz weave incantation
immersive subversive sound in-tox-I-c...
pulse/eight to the bar
eight to the bar
eight to the bar
forte! impromptu
crescendo
da capo me, da capo me
your rhythm so
entrancing
(oh)
maestro
ah now ah now
watch the beat!
(stop)
beat
(stop)
beat
beat
with rise and scream and devil drums,
the humming pulses
as she comes
signature time for one.more.
(breath)
recapitulation:
inamorata
vibrato
*trem-Oh-lo*
(breath)
your beating heart my metronome
my metronome
my metronome...
Awards
Comments on "Leitmotif"
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On Monday, April 11, 2011, vengeance23
(5) wrote:
Like this alot!
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A former member wrote:
I think that I read it and it just happens to make more and more sense each time I read it... Now I just understand the concept of it...
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A former member wrote:
I've read this half a billion times now...and each time it just gets better...
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, Tracer
(99) wrote:
I read this several times, each racing my mind into fantasmic wonders, very light hearted and erotic poem...very nice write...^vTracerv^
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On Thursday, December 25, 2003, Zahgurim
(29) wrote:
beautiful, stunning, erotic, intelligent, absolutely incredible and addictive.
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2003, Jadednoir
(28) wrote:
Oh babay...hmmm, your words are like sweet music to the ears... do you listen to dredg?!?!?! cause i love that album..your title~Jaded~
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On Friday, December 5, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Left me absolutely breathless. Forte, fortissimo!
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On Thursday, December 4, 2003, Jonas
(715) wrote:
sexual trance, entrance, entranced in the liquid flow of this dance... i really liked the metronome ending to this... perfect. nice write. you have a fun vocabulary, as well.
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On Thursday, December 4, 2003, SluG
(35) wrote:
This is really fucking good Purr, I cant wait to read more. ~SluG~
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On Thursday, December 4, 2003, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
I read this like four times. I still can't breath. amazing! just...wow.
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On Thursday, December 4, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
This poem is just awesome. So original and seducing. Fantastic.
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On Thursday, December 4, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
i get caught in the swirl, the whirl of the dance, my heart flies and my feet can't stop their steps. wonderfully done, it catches you into a swing dance and doesn't lt you go.
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A former member wrote:
This left me breathless. My heart pumped harder with each word. Magnificent. Oh I just can't get enough of this one.