Deer, In Coarsest Coat

By lupus tenebrae

Deer,
bounding off
on agile hooves, shadows; flighty,

gaunt, the flecks of fresh snow-
fall entrapped in coarsest coat.

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Copyright 2016 lupus tenebrae
Published on Saturday, February 13, 2016.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Just a fleeting observation of deer frolicking through the snowbanks of my backyard.
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  • Lab Rat On Saturday, February 13, 2016, Lab Rat (124)By person wrote:

    I have read you quite abit, I've never got the words to relate my thoughts though, which is rare. I enjoy the feel of your writing, the perceptive view of a world around, the detail, intricate movement of what I read from you. I'm far from a critic of any sort, but the words you write are enjoyably crisp. Thank you for that.

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