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Empty Space - Spoken Word Version
By TropicalSnowstorm
Empty Space YouTube Version
http://youtu.be/tJZ_fIGLYK4
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Copyright 2014 TropicalSnowstorm
Published on Wednesday, April 30, 2014.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
About returning to the US after time in Afghanistan.Comments on "Empty Space - Spoken Word Version"
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On Friday, January 8, 2016, soul_versing
(774)
wrote:
I won't lie, this piece was a lot to take in. My compassionate nature compels me to reach out to those in need, while my reserved nature compels me into a safe zone. I guess my mental state isn't that far off the grid that it forces my wandering shell back on track. ***such strong depth in your delivery. You spoke with such passion that it truly moved me. -applauds
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A former member wrote:
wonderful.
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On Wednesday, May 7, 2014, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Great piece.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2014, haunted
(837) wrote:
and welcome home, my daughter is in the navy and just returned to the states. its very emotional and im glad your back home.
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On Thursday, May 1, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Thanks! I have actually been back since 2005 and wrote this back then, but I wanted to use this one to experiment with the visual medium. A friend of mine has a warehouse with all the "props" and I thought it would compliment the piece. Glad your daughter is back!
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2014, haunted
(837) wrote:
wow that is really cool. I loved the poem and its illustrated as well by the things around you. and some cool stuff to, lol.. I loved it, great job!
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