A Cheesy Love Poem

By lupus tenebrae

Let me brie your every
single afterthought:
a garish, golden cheddar
shaping singles in your hands

as a gentle mozzarella melts,
entrapping you in
lithe embrace;
a dash of your desire

writes a verse
that love can prove alone.
It's this verse,
this casu marzu

turning bleu 'til it's
acquired taste,
that renders rhyme
and rhythm full of holes:

which then becomeĀ 
lovesick pools
that deepen with my
every retrospective gaze.

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Copyright 2014 lupus tenebrae
Published on Monday, February 24, 2014.     Filed under: "Satire" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Just a little something I'd written for Valentine's Day, more like a personal challenge, I suppose.
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  • Selenophile On Sunday, May 15, 2016, Selenophile (22)By person wrote:

    Very cool. I love cheese too.

  • Steven86175 On Sunday, September 13, 2015, Steven86175 (16)By person wrote:

    Love the writing and cheesy part haha. Good write

  • Jesse Guzman On Sunday, September 6, 2015, Jesse Guzman (39)By person wrote:

    Great write! Thanks for the read

  • A former member wrote: A whole new meaning to being cheesy lol.

  • A former member wrote: LMAO. Clever but your right. It's cheesy.

  • Strataic On Monday, February 24, 2014, Strataic (99)By person wrote:

    One acquired in taste, you keep wanting more. Lovely piece I say you did your challenge well, thanks. Scholar

  • Melankolia On Monday, February 24, 2014, Melankolia (46)By person wrote:

    I love this. Craftsmanship at it's finest!

  • megaprime81 On Monday, February 24, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Awesome composition. Great job! 10

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