Double Dose

By lupus tenebrae

 



Once shaken,
every drop of serum,
one that could have been the antidote,
viscous form of residue, the cure meant just for us.
The needles, and their insistent sheens
are too similar to
our vices,
and our soulless birdsongs
for whom should rule the roost at sunrise.
Yes, this flatland living, is a tired concept,
never double dip your nostalgia,
or write beyond the pen’s
meager dose. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Friday, March 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

You shouldn't dwell in past tenses, when there are perfectly good present and future ones. Written in triquain.
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  • A former member wrote: Brilliant writing!

  • A former member wrote: Wow-ee! I too love the line "Soulless birdsongs to rule the roost at morningtide." that blew me away. Wonderful write!

  • dwells On Friday, March 30, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Soulless birdsongs to rule the roost at morningtide - too cool my friend, thanks.

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