Double Dose
By lupus tenebrae
Once shaken,
every drop of serum,
one
that could have been the antidote,
viscous form of residue, the cure
meant just for us.
The needles, and their insistent sheens
are
too similar to
our vices,
and our soulless birdsongs
for
whom should rule the roost at sunrise.
Yes, this flatland living,
is a tired concept,
never double dip your nostalgia,
or write
beyond the pen’s
meager dose.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Friday, March 30, 2012.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
You shouldn't dwell in past tenses, when there are perfectly good present and future ones. Written in triquain.Comments on "Double Dose "
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
Brilliant writing!
-
A former member wrote:
Wow-ee! I too love the line "Soulless birdsongs to rule the roost at morningtide." that blew me away. Wonderful write!
-
On Friday, March 30, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Soulless birdsongs to rule the roost at morningtide - too cool my friend, thanks.