Copper Coloured Mirror

By lupus tenebrae

 



Does the water flow in copper slivers,
tasting iron ore in rusty sweetness?
Maybe in the form of waking rivers,
can the wishing well regain its blueness.

Maybe in the murky winter window,
can the seeing eye retain its powers,
unafraid to look upon the widow,
unafraid to count the venom’s hours.

If it can be said of autumn’s passing,
that the sprigs of colour leave, undying,
let the man and myth confess, for laughing,
at the inner maple’s sappy crying.

Soil starts with darkness every season,
with a new potential sprout of reason. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Friday, February 24, 2012.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

No matter how innocent the sapling, know that it will grow tougher bark eventually. For The Dark Noob contest.
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  • DarkAsh On Friday, February 24, 2012, DarkAsh (45)By person wrote:

    this is for the contest correct?

  • lupus tenebrae On Friday, February 24, 2012, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    Yes, I should have labelled it perhaps, but it slipped my mind. Scholar

  • DarkAsh On Friday, February 24, 2012, DarkAsh (45)By person wrote:

    haha okay just making sure. Good work.

  • sTr8-jAcKeT On Friday, February 24, 2012, sTr8-jAcKeT (697)By person wrote:

    Great imagery & play with words. Loved some of the vocabulary as well, keep it up!

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