Saturn's Poetry

By lupus tenebrae

Sentiment
is crooked sediment,
like unassuming, simple patterns,

And stylistic stanzas of paper lanterns,
can then hide their meanings, like the rings of Saturn,
with a telescopic artistry

Of all the art to see,
poetry.

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Published on Tuesday, February 21, 2012. Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A very interesting style I came across, called trois-par-huit, or three by eight. I love treading new ground, even in slow, plodding steps.

Comments on "Saturn's Poetry"

A former member wrote: I am inspired, though I don't know if i'll attempt this style. you seem to have captured the imagination of poetry. I am intrigued.
A former member wrote: Such beautiful distinction in this.. A soothing effect it's had on me. A true artist with words you are.
A former member wrote: Amazing_ that made my day
On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

Vedy interesting, and you bring us knowledge, the most noble gift of all, thanks dude!