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raped moon
By diavolessa
your last word was 'autumn'
the desire between the written verses
On sleepless paths
a raped moon takes her walk
when was the last tango,
the last dance of happiness?
your eyes flicked as stillness
touched the soul
in this profane place
mid-autumn reigned supreme,
on the tunes of an unwritten song
and the corpse of my poetry
should I talk? Should I laugh? Cry maybe?
should I look for you on sleepless nights?
on the verge of insanity
a raped moon takes her walk
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Copyright 2003 diavolessa
Published on Monday, June 9, 2003.
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On Wednesday, February 22, 2006, D3ADT0WN
(186)
wrote:
Hm...Oh so popular but oh so strange..
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On Thursday, April 7, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
SO beautiful
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A former member wrote:
very creative and profound.
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
both powerful and beautiful write; simply excellence.
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On Sunday, October 10, 2004, Ravenblade
(313) wrote:
you have an amazing sense of melancholy that I pick up in everything I read...I must read more, thank you for sharing...>Raven
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On Friday, May 14, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
i couldnt stop reading your works. every piece you wrote paints beautiful and vivid pictures. i love your style. :)
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On Sunday, August 17, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
Eloquent.
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A former member wrote:
"your last word was 'autumn'" Immediately, w/ this first line, I was captured by the raw beauty of this cinema poem There is a splendid rhythm to your style. Bravo!
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
I have to go with bakkhus on this one from that line I was absolutely entrapped in your words, I love your style.
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On Thursday, June 26, 2003, celestine_moon
(46) wrote:
its magic how you took these words and transformed them into such quiet beauty. i could see the story unfold. it flowed so well. beautifully done. -moon
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
"a raped moon takes her walk"...there is so much to say in this poem...every line is alone beautiful and remarkable...gotta love the moon...inspirational and raped in ur eyes..great, great write.
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On Friday, June 20, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
I can picture you piece in my mind. Good write.
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On Thursday, June 19, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Beautiful. The moon is a very versatile image. It is refreshing to see something original done with it. Bravo!
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
This is great. It felt like being smoothly attacked in away...but not. Wonderful.~DW~
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful,i really felt this one,fantastic write,RB..xxx..
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A former member wrote:
AMAZING!
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On Thursday, June 12, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
these questions of the night.the intricate way in which you lay them. well done my friend...................urban
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Wow. Oh my God. Gasp. You get my drift.
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On Wednesday, June 11, 2003, pushblood
(27) wrote:
Absolutely beautiful. Your words leave me awe stricken. Thanks, ~P.B~
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A former member wrote:
"and the corpse of my poetry," this could be Vivaldi's lost season. Mid-Autumn. tragic and beautiful...
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On Monday, June 9, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
beautiful and tragic... cold and brisk like an autumn breeze.
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A former member wrote:
it crackled... this one is a crisp early frost. brava
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