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Frustration
By Gray Vision
Giving up
Giving in,
What the heck
It's how it begins
It's frustrating,
So nerve racking
And ground breaking
In the making
But as frustrating
As it may be,
It's only temporary
To me,
To feel and to be
In this sort of
Misery.
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Copyright 2010 Gray Vision
Published on Wednesday, April 7, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Feel free to comment or pitch advice, ty.Comments on "Frustration"
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(848)
wrote:
I adore this poem because the flow is so lovable and in conveyance of emotions which each one of us feel. Take care now. :)
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On Thursday, December 14, 2017, ToxicLove
(37) wrote:
Seriously how I feel... great write ~ToxicLove~
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On Monday, September 5, 2016, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Short piece with highly affective results. Reading this is like I just had my dose of therapeutic advice, and now I'm good to go. Overall, I LoVed your tone, great stuff. -Write on
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Ground breaking in the making... I love it!!!
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Oh ya you know the feeling to I'm sure, this was one of my first writes, I'm glad you liked it =)
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A former member wrote:
I see you continue to write from your heart and soul. Love seeing that your still on here. I just don't get on much anymore. Be well my friend. :)
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On Friday, June 17, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Thank you foster, it's been a while since I've last spoken to you, I hope all is wel on your end and hope to catch up with you soon. Take care till then =)
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, Iwas
(39) wrote:
nice man like a river keeping the flow. i dig it.
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On Friday, January 14, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Thank you Iwas, your works are pretty good also, you've got a thing for flow too. Thank you for dropping by =)
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me of when you see someone in a shop or on a street screaming or making a fuss and you think why are they doing that but it just is what it is and in the moment sometimes everyone can loose their patience. like this
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Thank you Red, ya i know what you mean and it only takes seconds for it to come and go crazy hu? Well thank you for dropping by I really appreciate it =)
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, XOCHITL
(40) wrote:
Short and sweet . . . Nice :)
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Hey, thank you very much =)
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On Saturday, July 3, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Hey GV, loved it, great write. Had me looking for a beat
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On Sunday, July 4, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Haha, ya it does have one in a sense, thank you for commenting =)
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A former member wrote:
wow.......just wow
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Loving the expression ES heh, I'm glad you enjoyed it =)
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On Sunday, May 9, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
That's the best thing about frustration, before too long it burns itself out, and that's what separates it from hatred. Well done my friend, thanks for sharing.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Intreging point of view wolfy, I just learnt something new. Thanks for yet another insightful comment =)
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On Saturday, May 1, 2010, theXkevorkian
(64) wrote:
Nice piece , Short but definitely expresses the nature of frustration and the mundane...... Oh by the way Welcome to DP ..... Write On :)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Kev I gotta catch up on your works, thanks for the comment though, much appreciated =)
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(176) wrote:
Temporary, a ray of hope?
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On Sunday, June 27, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Temporary of course which I guess can also be refered to the ray of hope you mentioned. Thanks you for commenting =)
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On Friday, April 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
In a sense it is, you see i wrote this poem in the manner that i did because frustration never lasts. As quick as it comes, it's gone that's why i kept the poem short to embody the duration of the emotion. Thank you all for commenting on this piece, I'll kep writing.
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On Friday, April 9, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
Ja, even in the worst of times know that eventually it will pass.
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On Sunday, May 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Exactly and better yet, sooner than you think.
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
I actually really like this write. It almost reminds me of a rock song for some reason. I bet if you expanded this and put a nice chorus you would have awesome lyrics. As for the concept, I know frustration just gets people so ticked. Pressing those buttons get annoying and you just want to be left alone. I like this write and the style. Write on. Welcome to DP.
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