A Gray Vision (with Evangeline)
By Gray Vision
Skipping and tripping over words and phrases
a
smack on the brow to show me how
Come on, Big Daddy, lead the way
Spell it out for me, I'm riding your coattails today...
I'll take
you on a journey, to a place far, far away,
Among the outstretched
luminous bands, across the heavens
To the one and only Milky Way...
Zoom, zoom, zoom, zipping right along
Sailing over astral planes
through time and space
laughing at the man in the moon's silly face
As he drifts away into a sea of dreams
And the sun slowly rears
its head
Beyond the vast mountains and streams...
She lets the
wind catch her hair
On this journey to nowhere
Flying through
this galaxy of imagination
Paying no mind to the laws of gravitation
Here, she's at her happiest
No regrets, no worries,
Drifting
through this mysterious place
That knows no boundaries...
He
takes her on a fantastical voyage
hitchin' that beam of light
she drifts on his grandiose jet stream
night after wondrous night
She knows not to grow attached
Been hurt once too many,
Savoring
this rare occasion
Like that of milk and honey
She knows no
love, safe for the night
only in scheme and technicolor, does she
feel right
with a broken halo and melting wings
skipping alongside
him, she sings
of light and dark, and white noise
she plays
with the minds of men like toys
she breathes ambient and pain
and carries sludge and acid rain
he cuckolds her with moonbeams
and astral rings
and she delights in the many gifts he always brings.
Author's Note:
Here's a piece Eva and myself put together for all of DP to enjoy, you're very welcome.Comments on "A Gray Vision (with Evangeline)"
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On Monday, November 13, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
that's quite the journey
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On Monday, August 15, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Mmmmmmmm... Tasty!!!!!
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Hehe ya this was a fun write, I'll have to do another some time soon, thank you for dropping by =)
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A former member wrote:
This painted a colourfull picture in my mind . World is just interpretation of what we see . I sometimes use my beer gogles:)
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Lol that sounds interesting, maybe I'll borrow those sometime haha. Thank you for commenting =)
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A former member wrote:
I love, love, love, when this happens. This is the kind of thing I think we need to see more of on DP. Artist's coming together, encouraging each other and in turn inspiring others. This was an awesome write guys. Thank you so much for sharing it and showing others how amazing it is when we support one another on DP! :)
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
I agree Foster, how cool would it be for you to do a painting of some sort and have someone write something pertaining to it, that could be a form of collaboration to hu. Sounds like something I'll have to try some time and seeming that you do paint, maybe we can work on one. Alrighty then you take care of yourself in the mean time and thank you for commenting =)
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On Saturday, July 24, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
fantastic write... great imagery... a real pleasure to read
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
You're welcome Malcholm, I hope to post more soon, I'm just glad you all can enjoy and appreciate this piece, thanks again =)
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A former member wrote:
You flowed nicely together! Well done. It is great to see poets get together and make beautiful art. =)
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Moma KS, it's good to hear from you again and I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, I had fun putting this one together with my partner Eva. Thank you so much for commenting =)
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On Friday, July 23, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
An awesome collaboration, a very dream like quality to this piece, the beginning gave me a feeling of flight, free from the constraints of reality, incredible work from the both of you.
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Thanks wolfy, you know maybe we can pull off a collaboration here sometime or anyone reading this for that matter, i'll be more than happy to work on yet another ride. Thank you for commenting =)
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On Friday, July 23, 2010, Bulvine
(29) wrote:
I went on the ride with you..I felt free and alive
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
I hope the ride was bump free heh, thanks for commetning =)