Masquerading: within
By A Life Without You
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The patter
of footsteps drew sound from heavy bricks,
made paths to and fro
…gardens grown of innocence
Father times’ last will and testament has gone missing among Autumns
leaves,
elegantly placed beneath the feet of dancing Queens.
… forever lost within the music
Unknowingly forced off the cloak of heavens burdens,
only to realize they were my own.
In this sea of slaughtered fish I will float.
No wind beneath my sail.
…nor water beneath my boat.
Taking the paint brush from your
hand,
I choose to paint a new word across the sky filling the space among the birds,
"Emptiness" I shall paint,
…a lovely four letter word.
I cautiously await your question
closing my eyes to the north winds.
You gaze across my face,
…the smile of a friend.
The breath of an Oceans breeze,
lost in the sound of a setting
Sun.
...a barrage of broken arrows - fired from cupids gun.
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Comments on "Masquerading: within "
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A former member wrote:
LOVE is WONDERFUL, but PAINFUL at the sametime. you get HURT, you become HAPPY, but no matter what they ALWAYS LEAVE A MARK.
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A former member wrote:
*sighs* yes... love love loved. =)
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On Monday, July 19, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
thank you, heart you much!
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A former member wrote:
Gorgeous. It's a very interesting read. I Loved it. Please write on :)
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On Thursday, July 1, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
hey thx, glad you enjoyed, thank you
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A former member wrote:
this feels so inside out; a looking dark glass piece but with such spiritual undercurrents and tones...the fish, the father, the spirit, a garden--even a fallen queen...but the message is so much more aching than that of mere spirit. it's an internal recognition and a voice of slight despairing reason.....great captivating piece.
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On Thursday, July 1, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
hey thank you SM, you have helped to inspire more then you know...
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A former member wrote:
Visually so deep within your words. Amazing write my friend. :)
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On Friday, July 2, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
hey thank you, thanx for taking a read
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
What! Someones been doing some experimenting and with rhythm to, I love it, you certainly caught me off guard with this one and the last line... "A barrage of broken arrows shot from cupids gun," No wonder there are so many broken hearts, brilliant. This piece was a stroke of genius my friend, thank you so so much and I meant to use so twice, your eyes aren't playing tricks. Thanks again =)
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On Wednesday, June 30, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Ah yes my friend GV, glad you enjoyed. We can only write for our selves for so-long. It is the pleasure that others take in our work that make it all the more meaningful, thank you again