the old man and his flute
By Taunting The Reaper
there’s an old man playing his flute
the notes are crystallizing into diamond sunshine
there’s a mountain standing tall
reaching, grasping at the heavens
touching sky
and somewhere in the night
the owl has a question
while daylight brings the answer
while the coyote howls
the flute sings
the clouds dance
the moon sleeps
and the caterpillar is twice born
some caterpillars turn into butterflies
but most turn into moths
oddly enough
between the two
the butterfly is adored
while the moth is ignored
or hunted
or poisoned
or beaten
or tolerated
at best
we don’t have balance
and fairness is the word nature laughs at
the most
but the old man plays the flute
and we dance
because the sunshine is everything
and I’ve been in the dark for too long
Comments on "the old man and his flute"
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On Sunday, September 21, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
well optimism is a life saver at times...
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On Friday, June 20, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
...adored, or ignored... so many different spots in this write tweaked on things I've been contemplating, truly wonderful.
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On Friday, June 20, 2008, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
words and images that stir the emotions and viewpoint gently yet poignantly... the title itself personally nostalgic... well done
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On Friday, June 20, 2008, DIATRICUS
(64) wrote:
exceptional capture of dynamic contradictions... very nice! Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
wonderful write. ~ hdb
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On Friday, June 20, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Love the images here, especially stanza one, an excellent piece