The Used To Be Man
By Malcholm Dark
I used to be a tear getter, love taker
A
ladies breed of man, a heart breaker.
I used to be one cool kat,
hip-hop shaker
A man of love, a turbo-charged baby maker.
I used to be a slicked up dresser, fresh jetter
A gentleman's
quarterly, a real trend setter.
I used to be one styling kat, a
cut better
A chic artist, a thread wearing go getter.
I used to be a life taker, ass kicker
A dog of war, a deadly flame
flicker.
I used to be one cruel kat, fight picker
An enemy
destroyer, a dirty pig sticker.
--I once had set this
world on fire,
a shooting star, that's what I am.
--Now my ways
have ceased to inspire,
look at me now, the used to be man.
I used to be so many things, once upon a way
A drunk
driver has since taken them all away.
I used to be one functional
kat, only yesterday
The used to be man is what I have become today!
--Now there is nothing more to prove,
a quadriplegic,
that's what I am.
--My intire body has ceased to move,
wasting
away...
day by day...
the
used to be man.
Comments on "The Used To Be Man"
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On Friday, May 6, 2011, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
Oh, I was not expecting that ending! Well played. Very clever manipulation of the reader's emotions throughout.
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On Saturday, October 30, 2010, alex herewane
(149) wrote:
Your still the man, I can read that in your work.
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
O Man MD, you had me smiling in the beginning, laughing even. Now I fell bad after finishing it... you could have just smacked him around a bit, didn't have to put'em in a wheelchair for life, lol. I always enjoy ur work, thx MD
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(176) wrote:
I love your poetry, and the stories you tell. The lessons, the morals.
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On Sunday, March 21, 2010, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
Damn...That's all I can really say
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On Sunday, March 7, 2010, punk mc cool
(74) wrote:
aww dude that was like really sad....and im not just saying that cuz im the emotional type....loved it :)
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On Sunday, March 7, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Oh wow, that was truly depressing. The ending was even a little shocking to me, I wasn't expecting it. A brilliant write once again, you never seem to disappoint.
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant work, I think I've sat down with this man a few times and chatted over a cigarette.
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A former member wrote:
My god this is just masterful.
Truly brings a tear to the eye, and i must admit i never ever cry.
Keep up the great writing.
I look forward to it all.