She Swallowed the Sky.

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She swallowed the sky,
each and ev'ry dancing light.
I watch heaven die.

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Every night.

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Published on Monday, January 11, 2021. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "She Swallowed the Sky."

On Monday, June 16, 2014, Pride Ed (107) wrote:

Nice. I don't see to many poets use this style of writing anymore. Well crafted work!
On Friday, May 3, 2013, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Gorgeous piece..Wonderful crafting.
On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, Alchemist (679) wrote:

I'm always a fan of your senryus.
A former member wrote: 20 syllables, vast imagery...the art of the Prophet...well penned.
A former member wrote: brilliant!
On Wednesday, March 30, 2011, ubiquitoussoul (343) wrote:

Super.. Cosmic..what a gaze
On Wednesday, March 30, 2011, lupus tenebrae (860) wrote:

As if the last one weren't dismal enough, well played.
On Wednesday, March 30, 2011, Malcholm Dark (806) wrote:

senryu is so fun to write... well done here my friend...
A former member wrote: you should write more and put them into a collection. both of these are jewels.
A former member wrote: Yeah. Dark. Swallowed whole & with no fancy words. Not many can make these short forms as potent as you. **bows**
A former member wrote: ...............until this one....*welling suffocation**